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The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

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SrLao
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I remember that Aron had a sister that he secretly murdered for fear that the three leading heads of the Vulturis would split up, causing the severe depression of one of the three and causing his wives to be "locked up and drugged so they wouldn't complain". I don't know if it was before or after their war with the Romanian clan. The MC could save the sister, prevent Aron's "evil" course, Marco (one of the 3 main heads and husband of Aron's sister) would owe the MC a big favor, and the other members of the Voturi clan, seeing Aron's treachery, could kill him, lock him up or expel him from the clan. In the end the wives of the three heads would take control of the clan. (traductor)

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Bnathann
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omnigodvoldigoad
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who the love interest of the immortal author Chan

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KUROSAMA
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ty 4 the chap, and he should make a university, because who controls the technology controls the word, and focus on programing later, he can control the word with ai, maybe one day he can se the people who send him there

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Kacper_Furude
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Will he move gold out from Rome? I would move everything at his place and not only gold.

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SpeedyG
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Thanks for chapter...

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Ulvr_Laoch
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theanimemail
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Honestly, I really liked this chap. Would love more of this type.

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Same_Jake
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Daoist6Dg0Hk
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Continua assim feijão

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Growl_16
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update please

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BigDickEnergy1
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I hope the love interest is Jessica. I've never seen a Jessica Stanley x oc before 🤩

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GawS
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thanks for the chapter 👍👍

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Divine_Isu
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Looking forward to more. This is one of the stories I look forward to most.

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Bisabing
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Thanks for the chapter

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svenlol
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It´s really an interesting story. Hope you can include little bit more romance or drama with people they know or someting?

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Estelem_Shelym
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Obrigada pelo capítulo

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GIL_372
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dude when is going to get his powers its been 4300 years for God sake

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redkingtfk
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rip chandler.

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Mosaic064
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gracias por el capitulo, la historia es bastante buena hasta ahora esperemos que siga así.

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