Comments of chapter undefined of Shinigami Of The Marvel World

This is how i write trying to reach the minimum word count in my essays lol… a whole lot of nothing

i get you are trying to write a good fanfic but the way you are writing it is terrible. Too many unnessary adjectives that do nothing for the story and creating nonsensical cliffhangers for no reason. Almost every sentence has too much extra flowery words as if you are trying to write a poem instead of a fanfic.

really the ending was just way to abstract for me.

Uuuuugh another mostly pointless chapter, legit though we were about to start moving forward but then it started once again with the info dumping & how the mc was feeling etc. -_-

that was to abstract for me

what... are you Chinese??( pun intended )

Question will the Mc eventually summon yoruichi since she from the soul society plus she one the two girls that are my favorite females in bleach.

This is a whole chapter of nothing.

could you please post mc's pic

wife

Thanks for the chapter

Your writing is superfluous.

Good Chapter