TheRamenLord
I have two questions, maybe they'll be answered if I read the rewritten chapters, but I really struggle to start reading rewritten chapters... The first one, is this Crown Venture 100% Mark's or just a bit? And the other one, are the three celebrities you added to the story couples way in the future or will they become couples soon? And from my perspective, as long as they're pretty, you can add as many celebrities as you want! More is better.
Nice to see the pace is becoming more reasonable with the new projects starting. Few authors keep their muse for several years to a decade of writing, but I hope to see this story continue on past Knives out now that you've laid the groundwork with so many moving parts :) Just hoping it doesn't get too bogged down in the details going forward with Mark taking on so much and with so many with many characters to include in his kingdom building, plus the Harem stuff. I've seen this in many harem stories where there's more than 2-3 girls. The Harem parts become the focus, so they're not just HaremWifey number 5, and the main plot falls by the wayside. Or the other way around.