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guilherme99gc2hCommentedHe took a deep breath. "Close your eyes now. Turn around and count from ten. Come and find me whenever you're done. The one who finds me first gets a bedtime story from daddy tonight. Don't peep, Art. Don't peep, you hear me? Don't peep…"- guilherme99gc16hCommented"Finally, the opportunity has come to create a major event to destroy the era of pirates, it's time to show the true power of the navy to the world!" Sengoku spoke in his office. He had long wanted to create something that could change the era that Roger created before dying, and taking down the world's strongest pirate would be a good opportunity for this. "We can catch many rabbits with one throw." He said. "Now it's time to talk about this other threat, the son of Dragon and grandson of Garp..." He spoke, moving on to the next meeting with the officers who had arrived from Enies Lobby, now completely destroyed.
- guilherme99gc16hCommented"Hello hello." Kizaru spoke in his tedious tone.
- guilherme99gc23hCommentedIs this really the same guy who taught me herbology and crossbow skills? Is he really the same guy who hypnotized me every night so he could teach me meditation? Maybe this is how witchers work. They can kill both monsters and humans. Roy held his crossbow and took a deep breath. He parted his legs and lifted his arms, standing in the shooting pose he'd practiced many times.
- guilherme99gc23hCommented
For those who didn't even want to live in the past life, out of nowhere it creates the desire to work hard.
The message rang around him, and Roy sighed. "I knew it. I'm a peasant's son, after all. That's what I should be. I wasn't sent to a witcher because of any accident, nor am I part elf, and I'm not a magic-sensitive person. The only way I can stand tall in this world is through hard work." That moment steeled his resolve to become a witcher. - guilherme99gc1dCommented
I knew this was going to be dragged, and that level is not going to do any good either, the mc is going to be an idiot who gets beaten the whole fight and gains power out of nowhere at the end, or the author is going to give random power boosts because a legendary monster appears and that gave enough XP to go up 10 levels.
After concentrating his mind on the plus sign, a new message showed up on the sheet. "Level 1 (3/500)." - guilherme99gc1dCommentedWhen Roy saw Fletcher calmly skin the cow, disembowel it, and filet the meat, he started to puke. The stench of the cow's insides filled the air, becoming a miasma of everything that was foul in the world. Everywhere he looked, Roy could only see a crimson hue, the cow's blood splattering everywhere.
- guilherme99gc1dCommented
I've seen a lot of heavy shíť on the Internet, and I regret looking.
He thought Roy wouldn't make the kill, for a young man like him had never seen blood. However, the soul inhabiting this body lived in a time where information was free, and gore was abundant. Roy, or to be more precise, Luo Yi, had seen worse than a cow's butcher. - guilherme99gc1dCommented
What the füčk, from the looks of it, this is going to be dragged out too much, only 1 XP for killing an animal, oh my god.
2/100! It worked! "I knew it! This works!" - guilherme99gc1dCommented"So the sun gives me 0.33 EXP per day. In that case, staying under it for 333 days would fill my EXP bar and level me up." Roy calmed down. Staying under the sun to level up was a stupid idea, but it was the safest way to do so.
- guilherme99gc1dCommented
He turned into a tree lol
The character sheet was Roy's cheat in this world. Thanks to it, he stayed under the sun for three days, for absorbing its energy would help him clear his confused state. At the same time, he gained one EXP from staying under the sun. - guilherme99gc1dCommented
It's amazing how the gods in China always smile at the wrong person, this mc was a piece of shïť in his past life and didn't seek to improve instead accepted what he is, there are people who must have a much worse life and don't think about killing themselves.
"I got addicted to games just so I could fill the void in my heart. And now I have a second chance to do so. The gods are smiling on me." Luo Yi inherited all of Roy's feelings and memories, which made him feel close to Moore and Susie. - guilherme99gc1dReplied to Mj_Rosanto"Did you hear? A horse crashed into Moore's kid."
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Translation is good. The story is good, but I can't say whether it's because it borrowed a lot from the original or the author managed to develop many good original parts, I haven't read the original books but from what I know about the games the author borrowed a lot, which is normal since It's a fanfic. I couldn't bear to read here and I went to see an MTL and from what I saw, even with the bad translation of where I read it, it's still good until the end, it's a little slow from the beginning until a little after the middle of the story but it's ok, in the end it's just it gets faster because it seems that the original author lost readers and decided to speed up the end of the novel. There are about 200 to 250 chapters of MC preparing to win the war, which I found dragging, then it's about 150 until the end of it all, this being the war from the first invasion of Cintra until the end in which the MC defeats everyone ("rules the world"), the original author seemed to want to make it longer with the same rhythm as the beginning but when that didn't work he started summarizing things and skipping battles just showing results, the although it was well done. The ending is good, it kind of leaves open but The witcher arc is finished in this novel, it is only shown that the mc can go to other worlds in the end, but Ciri could already do that in the original, it is open only in this part what seems that the author does not intend to continue, but I feel that the novel is over and it ended well, anything else can be put in another novel or something like that. I'm not a fan of many Chinese works as they usually have low quality but this one surprised me a little, but the original material is also good.