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I have two questions, maybe they'll be answered if I read the rewritten chapters, but I really struggle to start reading rewritten chapters... The first one, is this Crown Venture 100% Mark's or just a bit? And the other one, are the three celebrities you added to the story couples way in the future or will they become couples soon? And from my perspective, as long as they're pretty, you can add as many celebrities as you want! More is better.
I'll never understand people's fascination with making characters who don't want to kill, kill. It always happens with Batman fanfics; he always ends up killing. Killing is the easy way out, the path most would take, but specifically because of that, we're not heroes and they are. It would be so easy for Spiderman to kill his villains, but he chooses not to, and that's why he's one of the best heroes in Marvel.
In the previous chapter, I was just complaining that there are more harem candidates who are OC than Hollywood stars. Sofia Vergara disappeared, and I personally don't find JKR attractive (but it's your taste). Personally, I would like more actresses or models to appear. The '90s were a decade with many beauties.
There are two things that don't make sense if he's already 18. Being of legal age, he doesn't need a legal guardian, as mentioned before; it's a university, so having a guardian is implausible. The other thing is the broom. It made sense when they were 11 and it was a danger, but now they could easily be part of the Quidditch team in the first year with their current age.
Honestly, since they stopped releasing as many chapters as before, it lost my interest. However, today I wanted to continue reading to see where the story was, and I don't remember what the mission's reward is. Not to mention, you seem to assume that one knows what the Elder Scrolls are and what Arda is, but truthfully, I have no idea.
What mutant vampires is he talking about? He mentions dates, so I assume it's a movie. Isn't it part of the comic book universe? Also, I have a question about the clones: does he learn what they learn? If not, why does he spend points on skills for them, considering that if they die, he loses those points?