What kind of Superman is this? Anyone with a bit of strength can make him feel pain? Besides, why does he patrol? Superman can hear everything happening in the city without the need to patrol. It's just one city, and his super hearing is much stronger.
Being in House of the Dragon without being a Targaryen is kind of boring. They don't have real power to bring about change unless you come up with something strange outside of canon. That's why it's better set in the era of Game of Thrones.
I don't understand, if you make Ash a better trainer, why is he still as goofy as he is in the series? Isn't he supposed to be a different person in Ash's body? Why does he always fall for the same nonsense?
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I hope he doesn't end up with Ron as his only friend like in the canon. Ron is a terrible friend, always jealous and annoying. Or at least write him as a good friend.
I don't understand why he lets his uncle talk to him like that. I get that he doesn't want to be too violent, but reminding his uncle of his place would be necessary. Otherwise, he's being stupid, and you didn't portray the MC as stupid.