Terror Infinity: Monster

MC is a retard. He wastes his points, even knowing he's wasting them, and for what reason? Because he's a retard.

This story will be slightly different from Terror Infinity in some aspects, but overall will follow the same ideas. Alexander, the main character, will have to go through different fictional worlds, which can be Movies, Books, Anime or Games, so any piece of fiction may appear. Don't hesitate to suggest your ideas!

Oomph, got too into the novel and ended up getting the S rank Patreon. Ended up reading all 15 advance chapters in one sitting. Now stuck with a massive case of blue balls. It’s unfortunate that I discovered this novel so soon - if I had waited a couple months I would of had a decent stockpile of chapters binge. The quality and chapter release rate has been great so far. Lets hope that the author’s muse continues to stay hyper engaged and we get continued updates. As is I give this novel 5/5. The novel has far exceeded my expectations thus far and is arguably better than the original. Keep up the hard work SlyOW - my wallet and I are rooting for you.

Suffers from generic problems like MC being kinda dumb and getting handouts when he doesn't deserve them BUT it was also pretty creative writing plot wise with the ending of the first movie. Overall this has the tell tale signs of a good base for the author. Hope to read his future works one day.

I enjoy the premise of the story, however the MC and certain developments that transpired in the story is very inconsistent. The character's personality being all over the place, seems like the author wants the MC to be many things all at once, but can't make up his mind on his ethics, morals etc. Not to mention there are already certain plot holes in the story. A complete beginner in combat somehow beating trained veterans. Yes he does have the Super Soldier Serum and The Force, but he got way too strong, way too quick in my opinion. Going from a below average person with strength weaker than most girls in his class(literally what the author wrote), to rivaling that of a soldier. And you may say that he has an advantage in stats etc, but I don't buy it at all. The MC himself beat people with greater stats than him. Overall, The Terror Infinity premise is interesting, everything else in my opinion is subpar. However I still hope the author continues writing, the language usage in this fanfic is much better than most of the fanfics. I just would suggest giving a little more thought to the power up and development of the MC. Making him starting off in a world which normal people can survive in, like the Walking Dead, etc where he can develop his skills. Possibly even giving him a mentor during the first scenario he has to clear, so he may develop survival skills, combat skills and many more. These are just my thoughts.

Mc's brain dead, mc acting with his emotions. Low star review because Mc is stupid. the author changes the plot of the novel and makes mc a brain dead person.

I don't know why the writers insist on having a naive and dumb mc that anyone who has read the novel for a while hates him. Why really???????

I'm liking the novel in general. I just hope you don't do like the original author did and start resurrecting the characters. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

excellent writing, superb dialogue, script of the first arc flawless, the atmosphere of terror infinity is very well transcribed, for the moment the fanfic is perfect

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God, how I've missed a good Terror Infinity. All of them are just dropped, unfortunately. And this one is well-written as well! I hope that you see this one through because it really is good. For a suggestion, if you are looking for one, I would give the Ben 10 universe. It has a high potential for custom missions and great danger/high reward or maybe a severe loss for character building. A lot of tech and potential mutations, for example, osmosian. They would have to be high-cost tough. Anyway I can't wait for more!

It's 10 out of 10 so far. I haven't seen any terror infinity ffs this good in a while. Keep up the good work.

I kinda like it. Have read till Chap 15. / 2.4. Mc's action has consequences and I really like that the opening and worlds they visit is different compared to the usual carbon copy of terror infinity. But have to see a few more world to build a solid review. So far so good, good job.

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OK, the story is good, and I like the premise, but my big problem with it is that all the worlds he went to before Naruto had like 15 chapters max, but he has been in naruto for 40 chapters and I get you might like it but the appeal of this ff for me atleast was he went to a world he did a mission and moved on to the next in 20 chapters or less maybe he goes back into the world for like 10 chapters if he wasn't in the world for long and there is stuff he wants to do, If you want to write a naruto ff feel free to do so but this is a terror infinity ff.

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I love the development of this novel so far. I’m a Terror Infinity fan and this is the closes your going to get to an original story of the series

Reading this fanfic was very pleasant, as it is still in its beginnings it is difficult to talk about the background of the story, but in short it is a bunch of people from the earth who are sent to missions in other worlds. I found the development of the MC kind of quick, but it was better than not having any, the writing is good and the way to become stronger is very interesting. I like this and expect more chapters in the future