Comments of chapter undefined of Champion of the Sea (Pokemon SI)

You know its fine and all that you showed the family dynamics and all . But with your updating schedule I'd rather read about something exciting like mc catching another pokemon or him facing another adversary. You given the mc quite a few handicap with his insecurity and all with the slow updating schedule, you never know when the story will even progress . Personally, I don't understand why is he so insecure about him not being part of the Canon story . I mean , with his knowledge of his previous world, he should know about various timelines and multiverse .

I don’t like how he’s just letting the dad b tch at him it’s super annoying lol I would have hit back a little bit but he just sat there and took it idk it just annoyed me 🤷‍♂️ awesome story thanks for the update

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the amazing chapter and merry christmas

great chapter and thanks for the update

Merry Christmas and thx for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

Ay man great chapter, just don’t drop it

Ima be blunt with ya big dog, that was too much exposition. A lot of dialogue. Tldr: too much telling and like, 10 percent showing- - - - So to break down what was boring (in my opinion) was the countless pgraphs of monologues. But, that 10 percent was pretty good. That scene with Misty crying was definitely showing instead of telling, it showed the reason his dad was upset instead of trying to explain us his point literally. Having more scenes like the Misty one is defo more impactful than all the ranting. Love ur fic, peace ✌️

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

TFTC.