Comments of chapter undefined of Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)

Great read and I'm loving the story so far. I just wish that the Prussian Army receives more setbacks. Everything is going to well so far with almost no mistakes. Even those few mistakes or challenges,if you could even call it that, effects are almost none to negligible at best. Not everything and everyone within Westeros are dumb and sh*t. The mc's retainers and soldiers had it all. The Finns in general and THE FINN himself feels to perfect of a military unit and a spy/commander that it feels to good to be true. Everything they do is perfect and flawless. All who get in their way are obliterated. This makes a lot of scenes loose the feeling of thrill or excitement of what would happen because you know they will do their job perfectly and flawlessly in the end. Also, I wish we have more scenes with the mc on it. So far most of the story is focused on his army. Also, I feel like the author's portrayal of Vary's too incompetent. For one of the smartest and most cunning character within GoT to fall so low easily and played like an idiot then I really am not looking forward to how the other original GoT characters would then be portrayed. Anw, awesome story overall. Looking forward to more.