Idek what’s going on anymore

Nvm I just realized what time period this is. Make Vanessa the love interest

Because the people doing these 5 star reviews are probably bots or they are giving the author pity. It was low at like 3.7 before all these random 5 stars. This story is not good at all.

Will he take all of big mom’s territory as his own? Maybe he can relocate Amazon lily near the rest of those islands as well with sabos fruit

Dude we just want to read something decent about luffys fruit in mha. Stop with the attitude and do better. The story will never stop? Fine but the least you could would be to actually write something that makes sense and is actually good. You’re obviously butthurt about the criticism but oh we’ll grow up and deal with it. Do better or honestly drop the fic. I’d much rather you drop it than continue to write pure nonsense that makes you look like an idiot.

Dude exactly. It was so frustrating to read.

You didn’t even do what you are commenting about? Luffy’s fruit is not that weak. He may not have been able to throw a punch when he was younger but his punches did pack a punch. God just rewatch 1071 the elders even explained luffy’s fruit is more like a reinforced rubber so it still hits hard. How about you actually do your research before writing nonsense. It’s not that the mc is weak it’s the fact you opened up with the mc being a freaking punching bag and not training his entire life. Like what? How do you go into detail about how you and authors rewatch the shows to make sure you don’t miss anything yet you completely miss where Luffy immediately started training when he got the fruit? Take your own advice pal and do better.

You didn’t even do what you are commenting about? Luffy’s fruit is not that weak. He may not have been able to throw a punch when he was younger but his punches did pack a punch. God just rewatch 1071 the elders even explained luffy’s fruit is more like a reinforced rubber so it still hits hard. How about you actually do your research before writing nonsense. It’s not that the mc is weak it’s the fact you opened up with the mc being a freaking punching bag and not training his entire life. Like what? How do you go into detail about how you and authors rewatch the shows to make sure you don’t miss anything yet you completely miss where Luffy immediately started training when he got the fruit? Take your own advice pal and do better.

Yeah I’m dropping this. Story doesn’t make any sense.

Yes. WHO and what is number 7? I haven’t seen it in the manga or anime so I’m a little confused. Will there be more numbers? Idk but the number guys don’t really make sense especially now that we know about the saint(s). Any chance for the number things to just be replaced with more saints or something cause rn only 1 is confirmed in the manage rn so maybe just adding OC saints would be better and less confusing. Also will Jackson and his crew take whole cake island as their territory? I really think they should while waiting on Luffy and his crew. Maybe do a little timeskip?

Can we get 1 more epilogue of Happy and Hermione sending there kids to hogwarts please😩 it doesn’t have to be super long or anything but I’ve always loved that scene in the movies! Besides that amazing job!

The spear is such a blemish on a otherwise good story.

Drop another chapter😩😩

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I can’t until the Yule Ball. I hope him and hermione have some cute moments

The amount of his and her mistakes in Sakura dialogue is so bad. I hope this is fixed in future chapters.

Please do not drop this. This is the only marine fanfiction that actually works and makes sense. Call the new recruits the “best generation” in contrast to the worst generation. Do a time skip for when canon rolls around. Declare war on big mom or something. So much you can do. You could even declare war on black beard. Just keep this fic going because you e struck actual gold with a good solid marine fanfiction. Trust me especially with the recent chapters of the manga many people will come to read this fic.

It’s really not good at all. It felt like such a drag to read. I could hardly stomach any of the chapters to the point I just stopped all together. The same stuff is happening that happened in this guys Harry Potter fic. It’s complete nonsense.

I know that there’s a lot of chapters on your patron but I have a suggestion. Can Sousuke make a contract with the Chameleon clan? I’m not sure when Hanzo got it but it would be good for Sousuke should get it to so he can be the 4th legendary sannin.

Webnovel stories are so freaking bad no wonder this was hard to find