(Up to Chapter 55)
I'm not usually one to do a review, but this fanfic fascinated me, so I had to do one. Btw, sorry for my English; I'm not a native speaker.
Writing Quality: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I do not see a big issue with the grammar, probably because I am not a native speaker lol.
Stability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
It is not the best, but it is not the worst.
Story Development: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I really like the story's development.
From his training until his interaction with his family. Yes, the fight was dragged out, but that is not a big issue with this story.
Character Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
In my opinion, is this the best thing about this fanfic? The characters feel real. From their interaction to the emotions. And the main character also feels like a human who can feel sadness, pain and is capable of crying, which is quite rare in most of the fanfics.
World Background: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
It is the one piece verse. What else is there to say.
All in all, that is a rare gem that is not easy to find. I 100% recommend this to you, so don't let the first 4 chapters discourage you from stopping to read it; instead, read up to 10 chapters to decide if this suits your taste.
