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LEGENDARYDRAGON
LEGENDARYDRAGONLv11yr
2023-07-13 23:34

(Up to Chapter 55) I'm not usually one to do a review, but this fanfic fascinated me, so I had to do one. Btw, sorry for my English; I'm not a native speaker. Writing Quality: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I do not see a big issue with the grammar, probably because I am not a native speaker lol. Stability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is not the best, but it is not the worst. Story Development: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I really like the story's development. From his training until his interaction with his family. Yes, the fight was dragged out, but that is not a big issue with this story. Character Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ In my opinion, is this the best thing about this fanfic? The characters feel real. From their interaction to the emotions. And the main character also feels like a human who can feel sadness, pain and is capable of crying, which is quite rare in most of the fanfics. World Background: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is the one piece verse. What else is there to say. All in all, that is a rare gem that is not easy to find. I 100% recommend this to you, so don't let the first 4 chapters discourage you from stopping to read it; instead, read up to 10 chapters to decide if this suits your taste.

One Piece - Thorny Path To Freedom

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Meralman
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Hello everyone, I am Meralman, the author of this book. I hope I can offer you a very good story that is worth reading in what for me is the best constructed fictional world.

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pratiksymbol
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The story is good but feels extremely dragged out. The first major fight was nearly 10 chapters long which is dragged too much. I had to scheme through some of the chapters which felt like a chore to read. Also there is too much emotions with character. I think it would be better that you lowered that a bit. Also sometimes the main character feel unnatural.

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Tyler_X
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Great book. I really love it. You're the best, Meralman. Your other book about Broly was really great. I expected the same thing here and I got even more than I bargained for. This is one of the most interesting books I've read.

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ultrahi
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It's Meralman, its obviously going to be amazing like his Dragon Ball novel, which to this day remains my favourite, and the one I've reread the most. I've been looking forward to his new book from the time he first mentioned it and I am so happy its here

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The_Bored_Immortal
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Glad to see the Author is back, the Broly fic got me through an untold amount of road trips and school days. And this fic is already shaping up to be even better.

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Ssantos
SsantosLv13

In general the story is good, but what didn't captivate me was the way the author wrote the ff, as if it were an anime and not a book or even the narrative about what is happening and the environment, And what's going on in the scene, but apart from that the proposal is good, it just didn't please my taste, but I recommend that everyone read it and draw their own conclusions (I recommend reading about 5-15 chapters before To decide if it will drop or not)

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Wachdog
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A masterpiece, read it and you won't regret it, there are few fanfic that can be respected and the author is a writing genius, so you will never get bored with this

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rawthentic
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when i first started reading the novel, i did not think i would like it due to excessive monologues in the first few chapters. However I was clearly wrong. the characters grow on you, and their interactions are so reminiscent of humor in actual one piece. Now my favorite part of the novel is that its actually realistic with dark moments. also MC isnt overpowered but has to work hard for eveything he has or developed. he doesnt shy away from danger and nor he does he let people walk over him. he uses eveytjing including his brain to his advantage in every situation. The characters are all also very likeable once you get to knpw them. i just finished the leech pirates arc and it was absolutely incredible. I really recommend this novel as its one of my favorite one piece fanfics now. Ps: RIP Schrodinger

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LE_Van_Vinh
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5 stars no doubt .....................................................................................................................................................................................

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