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pratiksymbolLv51yr
2023-06-04 14:20

The story is good but feels extremely dragged out. The first major fight was nearly 10 chapters long which is dragged too much. I had to scheme through some of the chapters which felt like a chore to read. Also there is too much emotions with character. I think it would be better that you lowered that a bit. Also sometimes the main character feel unnatural.

One Piece - Thorny Path To Freedom

Meralman
4.3
115 Chs

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Hello everyone, I am Meralman, the author of this book. I hope I can offer you a very good story that is worth reading in what for me is the best constructed fictional world.

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(Up to Chapter 55) I'm not usually one to do a review, but this fanfic fascinated me, so I had to do one. Btw, sorry for my English; I'm not a native speaker. Writing Quality: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I do not see a big issue with the grammar, probably because I am not a native speaker lol. Stability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is not the best, but it is not the worst. Story Development: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I really like the story's development. From his training until his interaction with his family. Yes, the fight was dragged out, but that is not a big issue with this story. Character Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ In my opinion, is this the best thing about this fanfic? The characters feel real. From their interaction to the emotions. And the main character also feels like a human who can feel sadness, pain and is capable of crying, which is quite rare in most of the fanfics. World Background: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ It is the one piece verse. What else is there to say. All in all, that is a rare gem that is not easy to find. I 100% recommend this to you, so don't let the first 4 chapters discourage you from stopping to read it; instead, read up to 10 chapters to decide if this suits your taste.

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