Cyberpunk System in the DC Universe

I think you missed an opportunity to make a businessman character like lex luttor, instead of some criminal in Gotham, with all the technology in the system you could create a company and try to turn Gotham into Night City (I thought this now but Gotham is perfect for that). After all, let's agree that with this system the mc has a very weak power limit compared to DC characters.

The MC's choices are very weird, even taking into account out the villain like story development. Like going for a melee like build when having tech way beyond the times. The cyberpunk system just seems kinda mismatched with the MC's choices and underutilized. And then there is giving his tech away to others, that's where I drew the line and dropped

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From what I can tell, he told Talia Al Ghul that he has a system. That’s all you need to know to not read this fanfiction.

Started off a bit iffy but the main problems I had with it was that the mc really had no reason to become a villain, we don’t even know his reasons why but the one that annoyed me The most was he told talia al ghul who he recently met about his system and was giving upgardes out like candy

a story that started well despite having some problems with the main character as he seems to have no goals and the decisions the author made in the story were meaningless to say the least.

MC was giving upgrades out like candy and Reveals his powers for no reason.

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This is a nice story I liked so far its detailed and it's easy to understand so keep up the good work and I will remember to check when a new chapter comes out. Good luck with the novel. -BattelC

Chapter 2 rn, and so far the story is good. I like how paced the action is, in most recent stuff authors like to describe the scene rather than show it. I’m hoping that mc gains a bit more personality and that other characters are describe realistically. So far so good, liking the story and waiting for it to get some viewers; good job author. [img=recommend]

had the potential to be a good story but the author decided to go down a bad path to say the least.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Fairly fun concept however the execution leaves a LOT to be desired.

It great you put details into character building world building and writing quality is honest one of the better ones on Webnovel keep up the great work and I’ll keep reading

Very entertaining. I've gone to the most recent chapter and enjoyed all of it. The writing quality is top-notch compared to many stories on this website, and even then, the grammar and sentence structure is excellent. Nothing like reading a formal paper, but definitely has higher quality than most novels I have read. Stability I can't say much, but I would say for the length of the chapters, it has a reasonable update schedule. Story development is also worthy of a 5/5. It's not too fast, or too slow. And finally, the last two can be combined for a 5/5. The designs and feelings of both the world and the characters don't feel 'robotic' or 'bland', and also do not follow any of the super-common tropes. Overall, the story is worthy of a 5/5, and hopefully, the author keeps up the good work!

A good start, keep going author!!! I wonder how are you gonna how are you gonna handle the relationship between he mc and other bat family/ Justice league members.

I feel like someone is trolling u giving bad reviews u should check and not let some rubbish reviews get to u, Ur work is really good, I hope u finish it, i don't really want to see an author who drops his fic cuz of trolls, it happens to plenty dc fanfics

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have him use the qiant sandevistan with the 4 sec cd reducing mods and also the 30% cd-reducing cyberware. It's op since its 2 seconds of cooldown for 12 seconds of 25% slowed down time. Also, get him mantis blades or smth cool like that

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