I think you missed an opportunity to make a businessman character like lex luttor, instead of some criminal in Gotham, with all the technology in the system you could create a company and try to turn Gotham into Night City (I thought this now but Gotham is perfect for that). After all, let's agree that with this system the mc has a very weak power limit compared to DC characters.

The MC's choices are very weird, even taking into account out the villain like story development. Like going for a melee like build when having tech way beyond the times. The cyberpunk system just seems kinda mismatched with the MC's choices and underutilized. And then there is giving his tech away to others, that's where I drew the line and dropped

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From what I can tell, he told Talia Al Ghul that he has a system. That’s all you need to know to not read this fanfiction.

Started off a bit iffy but the main problems I had with it was that the mc really had no reason to become a villain, we don’t even know his reasons why but the one that annoyed me The most was he told talia al ghul who he recently met about his system and was giving upgardes out like candy

a story that started well despite having some problems with the main character as he seems to have no goals and the decisions the author made in the story were meaningless to say the least.

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This is a nice story I liked so far its detailed and it's easy to understand so keep up the good work and I will remember to check when a new chapter comes out. Good luck with the novel. -BattelC

Chapter 2 rn, and so far the story is good. I like how paced the action is, in most recent stuff authors like to describe the scene rather than show it. I’m hoping that mc gains a bit more personality and that other characters are describe realistically. So far so good, liking the story and waiting for it to get some viewers; good job author. [img=recommend]