Comments of chapter undefined of Lightning Human in MHA

I hope you dont kill off his parents

Still for Yaomomo. Don´t forget to let him actually study, because he was 16 with 4 years break in studies, many things would be shaky in detail and the more his brain works in his youth, the smarter/quicker thinker he will actually become.

Toga for love interest or Mina? Everyone avoids Mina and goes for Momo and I don't understand why. 😂

I have not even read it and feel like all the other MHA fanfics some how like a cool power they will Do something when they are young maybe even get a childhood friend who will he groom to be his wife go join UA high score first in everything be Better then all the teens and follow the plot to the teeth I have just read too many MHA fanfic not even one is original or unique all they change is the Background story or the power

he should be able to use godspeed right? and echo? like Killua

Tooru

you should have made him a genuis for his third wish but this is still good

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Yaomomo

government

Thanks for the chapter

Good

man reading the comments is really aids bro

nejire hado

What compelled you to write the dialogue like your writing a script? This is a novel not a play man.

How about no love interest at all xD Btw you should stop writing talking like this „Blablabla“ - aska And more like this: „Blablabla“ said aska It has a better flow while reading :)

All for one, Nezu, or Hero association looking to make another nagant or Hawk

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tyftc. keep it up, hope u dont drop