atleast make the sex scenes better

cheap smut power fantasy no real Brain behind it don't even make sense uses stupid excuses but it is what it is

i still Don't like the smut and NSFW because I think you can write a good plot and it's a waste of time to write smut

i Think this Smut was ok but Don't kill your MCs character over it Don't make him a scum i honestly Don't want the NSFW I want the plot

please no NSFW just plot 😭

I love this it was short but really good

what are you on about why will he have the mind stone and if he has that already he Does not need more power to rule Asgard plus Thanos had it in the original and gave it to Loki while mind controlling him plus if it's MCU loki loves Thor bruh what in the garbage mess is this story

wait there is no explanation about what is happening and why

English is also not my first language It's my 3rd language i learned on my own just from watching American YouTube so you have a skill issue

do you read your own fic bruh maybe ask a Friend to read it for you if you have a friend that is because it's writting in such a stupid way even I have used AI before but even that was not as bad

overall garbage its a translation or whatever feels shit to read it like I feel I have to smash a Hammer in my head and get Dumb to understand this shit the plot is ass the MC is garbage its predictable as soon a X-men are involved plus the MC and girls reactions are so weird bruh like she just accepts shit so easily and goes with it

MEN

Dude blowing bubbles on it 🫠

author is so gay

Member of Hand ??? HuH they where thugs not ninjas plus i Don't think police is good enough to know if it's hand that's more on Shield stuff

ok the author said there will be smut most of the story even he put it in tag his first chapter author note what are you incapable of not getting it that he will write smut and it will be just a mery sue strong guy who fucks bitches and pretend it's some gospel of God stfu

you must ignore every street sign this what a retard

40% will be plot 60% smut and where Do i got this number from I wonder lil bro go lick salt and get high

why not 😭

oh my a Blind person can't read authors note or tags what Do i do are you illetrate or something poor baby