Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Tango with Death

I'm sorry, great writing, but everything in these last two chapters is ridiculous.

bro what are you saying?? itachi never join the war at 5..his father take Itachi with him so he watch People fight and die with his own eyes! he never fought at war... where did you see at canon 4-5 y old be ready to kill chunin? lol

Funny, a little girl crying in fear was able to trap and kill a chunin? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA funnier than a joke, I have not seen or heard the author surpassed Boruto

Kinda wierd though, she should have died 100% so just makes it feel off

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Ok, I'll say it one last time even though I know it's pointless at this point. I'm just so tired of the number of times I've seen this mistake made... pfff. NEVER write a secondary point of view (other than your main character) in the first person singular. Any point of view written in the first person singular automatically becomes a "main character". However, your story is only supposed to have one main character, isn't it ?

Wow this is impressive

Maybe if it was tipped off more she was setting a trap I would like this but probably not. An 8 year old defeating a “experienced” chunnin with a kinda basic trap is just unrealistic. Idk it was a cool scene but just breaks my immersion remembering shes 8 and didn’t get completly wiped out by a chunnin that suprised her. Like he didn’t have any aoe jutsu? Just the rock throwing one as a chunnin? If it was a gennin then sure but naw this was unrealistic af.

im loving it so much

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Wow, thank for this very very great chapter

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