Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

It's a good novel, it has short chapters but has a fast update rate, just tries it maybe you would like it, Jejdjajfjekdkeosofjeosofdoti

Now that we won bronze in wpc harem contest, I again writing this comment. Well there may be some little grammatical errors here and there as I rarely proofread and edit. But, majority of it is a smooth read. Since its my first book that I am writing, I can only say the quality will keep getting better and better with future chapters😊😊

Amazing plot, characters are very well written and designed. I always love a story where the mc would steal some hot powerful guy. Very good story, definitely a 10/10.

Wasted potential.The first arc was a cliché but entertaining story by a clearly inexperienced, albeit promising up-and-coming author.It followed the tried and true trope of a reincarnator having to steal a son of luck protagonist's fate, with a fairly standard cast of characters (and yes, there are yanderes).The end of the first arc was where the story truly started to come into its own and showed flashes of brilliance, very successfullly expanding the world and upping the stakes, starting to build up a confrontation with the antagonist towards the end of the story. Unfortunately, this webnovel never managed to get there, suddenly entering a hiatus that lasted for months. By the time the novel came back, it rushed into a forced ending, disregarding all events in the story up to that point and breaking one of the most basic taboos in storytelling (it was all a dream...)Also worth noting that towards the end of the story the author remembered he was homophobic and decided to never forget again by reminding the reader every other chapter, spouting some of the most atrocious takes I've read, particularly in the sidestory

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So much wasted potential, the first hundred chapters were great. If he just kept doing the same stuff, it would’ve been great, but in the last chapter, he suddenly decided it’s all a dream the end. He didn’t even bother to tie up loose ends. He basically stopped in the middle of the story and said it’s all a dream. I can’t describe how disappointed I am.

I see the Necromancer Pettan in the in the cover. then this is 5 star for me........ ......................................................

Great been waiting For novel like these ,where mc steals all op girls against hero. And aushima seems best girl to me….expecting more chs soon.

i saw hindi in cover pic so i came [img=exp]

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This is an interesting story to read(since I've only read a few novels like this). The writing quality is good so far there is nothing to complain about and seems to be improving(how I see it) as the story progresses. For story development I won't lie it was a bit boring in the beginning. It did become interesting in the latter half of the story though but so far so good. The character design is good I like how the 2nd rate mcs of the novel don't follow the usual trope which was surprising and how all the characters developed whether true the 'eyes' being opened or by see how the 2nd rate mcs treats those around them a good twist. World building is like other novels with your higher and lower worlds but it isn't to big of a problem as I see it but others might think otherwise. I wouldn't know about the updating schedule since most chapters were out when I started reading but it doesn't seem to be an issue as I've seen so far.

The opening scene and MC thoughts are very interesting. Finally found a novel where the MC tries to rob and form a harem. Waiting for the adventure along with guild formation.

This story had so much potential there were many things that were yet to shown the author had yet to introduce different kinds of races powerful empires a good plot focused on academy life demon queens powerful goddess Dragoness a cultivation world an extremely advanced futuristic empire the plot about earth Gates and many more if author you ever decided to continue this story again I have given some plots you could use and to the readers untill he changes the ending do not read it. and a Note to author: [it's better to leave the story unfinished then to go oh it was just a dream way. This will make readers trust on you go away and i am sure no author wants that after who are they writing stories for us reader] I wrote all this just to vent my frustrations don't mind me.

A great novel, whit a great Development this is nice piece of art. Just the development of the love of aushima an elandor the in the travel is very sudden, i recommend a rewrite whit a longer chapters, in that chapters elandor and aushima need to develop the relationship whit a distant start, elandor doing a slow brainwashing and the slow approximation between them, that it will be more realistic and better than the actual short. Ps: in need the link of the portrait. Ps 2.0: sorry for the bad English I'm an Argentinian :)

honestly I have yet to even start the book but the title has drawn me in love the books with yanderes my favorite type of dere so I hope you don't mess it up (:

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Nice concept, but you need some edits to make your book looks neater, and make your chapters at least 1,5k+ words if you write one each day or 1k+ words with two chapters if you write two each day.

this is my first time reading a harem novel and it is really good. I just started reading the first 3 chapters n the characters design along with the story development is welly executed. keep updating daily.

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

Yandere? Say no more Yandere = Library