It's a good novel, it has short chapters but has a fast update rate, just tries it maybe you would like it, Jejdjajfjekdkeosofjeosofdoti

Now that we won bronze in wpc harem contest, I again writing this comment. Well there may be some little grammatical errors here and there as I rarely proofread and edit. But, majority of it is a smooth read. Since its my first book that I am writing, I can only say the quality will keep getting better and better with future chapters😊😊

Amazing plot, characters are very well written and designed. I always love a story where the mc would steal some hot powerful guy. Very good story, definitely a 10/10.

Wasted potential.The first arc was a cliché but entertaining story by a clearly inexperienced, albeit promising up-and-coming author.It followed the tried and true trope of a reincarnator having to steal a son of luck protagonist's fate, with a fairly standard cast of characters (and yes, there are yanderes).The end of the first arc was where the story truly started to come into its own and showed flashes of brilliance, very successfullly expanding the world and upping the stakes, starting to build up a confrontation with the antagonist towards the end of the story. Unfortunately, this webnovel never managed to get there, suddenly entering a hiatus that lasted for months. By the time the novel came back, it rushed into a forced ending, disregarding all events in the story up to that point and breaking one of the most basic taboos in storytelling (it was all a dream...)Also worth noting that towards the end of the story the author remembered he was homophobic and decided to never forget again by reminding the reader every other chapter, spouting some of the most atrocious takes I've read, particularly in the sidestory

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So much wasted potential, the first hundred chapters were great. If he just kept doing the same stuff, it would’ve been great, but in the last chapter, he suddenly decided it’s all a dream the end. He didn’t even bother to tie up loose ends. He basically stopped in the middle of the story and said it’s all a dream. I can’t describe how disappointed I am.

I see the Necromancer Pettan in the in the cover. then this is 5 star for me........ ......................................................

Great been waiting For novel like these ,where mc steals all op girls against hero. And aushima seems best girl to me….expecting more chs soon.

i saw hindi in cover pic so i came [img=exp]

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