Item: Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
Rating: 1.4
Author: TuChumi

TuChumiLv131yr

2023-12-28 22:30

Wasted potential.The first arc was a cliché but entertaining story by a clearly inexperienced, albeit promising up-and-coming author.It followed the tried and true trope of a reincarnator having to steal a son of luck protagonist's fate, with a fairly standard cast of characters (and yes, there are yanderes).The end of the first arc was where the story truly started to come into its own and showed flashes of brilliance, very successfullly expanding the world and upping the stakes, starting to build up a confrontation with the antagonist towards the end of the story. Unfortunately, this webnovel never managed to get there, suddenly entering a hiatus that lasted for months. By the time the novel came back, it rushed into a forced ending, disregarding all events in the story up to that point and breaking one of the most basic taboos in storytelling (it was all a dream...)Also worth noting that towards the end of the story the author remembered he was homophobic and decided to never forget again by reminding the reader every other chapter, spouting some of the most atrocious takes I've read, particularly in the sidestory

Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers

Sheizzcoldasice

4.5

158 Chs

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eyeless_grimmLv2

can you spoil the ending for me?

11mth

DaoistzEswsLLv4

man thank man saved me the rest of my weekend 😄

11mth

DaoistzEswsLLv4

spoiler.......... I watched the ending it is just the fact that he got in a car accident on real life and on e of his girlfriend saved him cuz she loved him a lot see used classified information to create a ai to create a parallel reality where he did whatever he wanted so he still have the desire to life so his brain dead brain after the accident will fix himself YW

eyeless_grimm:can you spoil the ending for me?

11mth

DaoistzEswsLLv4

Bruh so many grammatical mistakes 💀

DaoistzEswsL:spoiler.......... I watched the ending it is just the fact that he got in a car accident on real life and on e of his girlfriend saved him cuz she loved him a lot see used classified information to create a ai to create a parallel reality where he did whatever he wanted so he still have the desire to life so his brain dead brain after the accident will fix himself YW

7mth

LuciferTheDevil767Lv2

DaoistzEswsL:spoiler.......... I watched the ending it is just the fact that he got in a car accident on real life and on e of his girlfriend saved him cuz she loved him a lot see used classified information to create a ai to create a parallel reality where he did whatever he wanted so he still have the desire to life so his brain dead brain after the accident will fix himself YW

7mth

DaoistzEswsLLv4

why do you say that tell me your opinion.

LuciferTheDevil767:
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Malcolm_MasseyLv14

so the whole story was just a dream and the end was rushed? then it's not worth reading.

7mth

DaoistzEswsLLv4

lol ya

Malcolm_Massey:so the whole story was just a dream and the end was rushed? then it's not worth reading.

6mth

DaoistzEswsLLv4

nvm I understand now

DaoistzEswsL:why do you say that tell me your opinion.

6mth

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