RubberPeen
I hope it goes well. I am a bit biased against multiple MCs which I consider this as, mainly because it slows down plot progression a lot, we get a lot of catching up between them chapters and it makes very hard to balance things out, either the MC gets so OP the others have no impact or the others seem to be more competent and the MC useless or less lucky, this one leans towards the latter. The one in the other world was better since it was mostly the MC in the group leading them.