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Though lots of error, It was a good readđ
Feels like
The flow of thought needs fixing...but overall I like the plot. it is quite an interesting story line.
Lol the system glitched
the amazing chapter compensated for the grammatical errors...overall LOVED IT!!!
Interesting
There were a lot of errors that needs to be fix but overall the idea of the story was interesting
Baby come back
pretty out of context but real cool!
Pretty awesome first chapter~~
Here to read an amazing book>>
I liked the first chapter, it was captivating.
Your writing skill are captive.....curious to read more
Oh no! I hope someone saves him!
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
