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Comments of chapter undefined of Aden Strong: Avatar In DC

Okami9
Okami9Lv3Okami9

Red tornado looks like avatar lol

GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3GawkGawk

spar right off the bat? you clearly dont know how training works.

Shubhamtripathi033
Shubhamtripathi033Lv13Shubhamtripathi033

was it necessary including the party where his memories show them that they are comic book characters. i don't know why i hate this concept but i just hate it. others knowing your info just because they can i mean you could have just deleted that part or you could have written some sort protection so that others can't peek into his mind.

flame6669
flame6669Lv14flame6669

dosent he have the life and anti life equation in hus head or some if it in hus head as it was shown in the comics,animated movies and shows

Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

I see why there were some comments calling the MC a dog of the league, firstly the reason to tell Batman the whole truth is ridiculous Batman can't read minds and he's not even a magic user, best detective in the world or not, secondly saying these things is very dangerous not only for the heroes but also for the MC himself, since Batman was blamed more than once for the defeat of the league, having his countermeasures against them accessed by some villain, 3 if any intelligent villain put his hand on this information, it would be a massacre all the heroes' loved ones would be in danger as their secret identities would be revealed along with their weaknesses, villains would take revenge using them.

HUGO_RIBEIRO_2639
HUGO_RIBEIRO_2639Lv1HUGO_RIBEIRO_2639

Simplesmente não gosto como o mc conta tudo pra todos, eu sinceramente só dizer eu sou de outra terra já bastava , sei lá porque eu não gosto , mais é isso , droppei

Reistlan
ReistlanLv3Reistlan

Only 1 question : for what reason he go to league? ... It doesn't have sence.

kilgan
kilganLv5kilgan

good idea/play by the mc and it looks like he is smart or at least not stupid which is already great

Zachariah_Browning_8961
Zachariah_Browning_8961Lv1Zachariah_Browning_8961

He should get a Staff like Ang’s and a flying bison

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv13Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

Goldenswiftreader
GoldenswiftreaderLv5Goldenswiftreader

Oh so Young Justice is the black ops team, that makes no sense, no teen except maybe Robin would be able to stay stable in that kind of environment. Maybe only Batman refers them to black ops?

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Harem, Raven, Starfire and miss hunter and more.

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

MIGGER_FTW
MIGGER_FTWLv2MIGGER_FTW

Reading.

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Name2486
Name2486Lv5Name2486

thanks for the chapter.

eclairsshi
eclairsshiLv4eclairsshi

good, a moral and a brain. pretty likeable

PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapter