He collect his gfs for whole chptr. Chapter like this i call empty.

And use doppelganger/illusion always=\

Yeah - loki god. God of magic, tricks,fools and lies. But even in canon he didn't use magic beside illusion. He use knives coz' asgard honor only warriors. So magic - job for weak ppl. He wanna be great. So he use weapons 99% of time. Banner can't knew about speedforce. Why? Coz' there was said that no speedforce avatar 2000 years. So... He just can't. Reason know ao? When he first time use sf she must go to he. And explain if he would play with time she teleport him to other planet/plan. She(he if comix version) go with herself plan. And if he destroy it - would be pity.

English not my language - i read and write with autotransplantation. Writing Quality 4 - coz i cant say wrong or write. Updating Stability 3- this book only 3 day in my library and cant mark it better Story Development 1 - start and idea of ff - great. But so many holes on the plot... Sory i can't mark ZERO. Character Design - mc is bs. He chnge his mind from nothing. world background - too many holes. Bruce banner - knew about speedforce, but dont about stones. Stark and oscorp make particle accelerators ... Noone from them - can't do this coz' oscorp - biopharmaceutical, and stark not in this branch of science. If it make otto octavius would be better. Author give mc speedforce and give it nerf already after few chapter. (Yeah i can't say about rpg) When mc go for help - stark make costume with VIBRANIUM.... When they stop tesserakt - create blackhole.... After loki kill all family just take his hand.... Go to 616.... Just drop. Too many bs for me.

I can stay arrogant for 99% of bs mtl. But this..... I dropped on travel to 616. So many shit on one book - rare for me.

Ok, banner knew about speedforse, loki can use magic not knives. Why mc can't knew ancient one?

Very bad. Author don't wanna say that you bad writer, but i read ~20 mcu(comix)xDC(comix) and noone author can't do this adequate.

Seriously?.... Telekinesis can create invisible "aura" that can stop all stuff... Alien power - not panacea. Yeah, they have more variety... But telekinesis - one from most variety power.

You think this abilities isn't consuming stamina?

.... Telekinesis - isn't supernatural??? Teleportation?

When this bs will finish?

Read this.... Reread again.... Decide to drop.

I just wanna skip all of this useless fightings and descriptions. 2 chapters of them.

Yeah, but ino isn't born yet, so who know maybe she will be third?))))

Where is chapter?...

.... 2 chapters... But info = half of one. First chapter 85% of emotions and description.... If it was few sentences - was be better. Second.... No comments.

...... Before this chapter this story was great... But now... Too many no adequate move. When he see that he can't transform - why he didn't avada her for a moment????

Hmmmm.... Because he can't annihilate him. But... If chaos magic will sent him to other dimension or plan.... It could work... 25%~

When helga go away from this story i will give you my stones. I hate in story ppl like this. When read only one wish ↓

Wtf is last chapter?