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Comments of chapter undefined of The King is in love

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Kueni
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Good first start, I believe the story will follow the daughter or will it focus more on the mother who is growing sick, either way good first chapter.

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GEEGEE
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AYAS, i really hate mothers who abandon their children but i guess she has a reason for this after all. good start.

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M_mhmMM
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Such a good start! *clap clap* This novel has a promising start, not just the synopsis but the whole chapter is well done. The scenes are descriptive and lean more towards on showing rather than telling. Like the flow of the story. The characters are distinctive and they are already developing their assigned "role" in the story. I like this so far~!

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Soleil_Lynx
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What a good start!❤

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DaoistJ63FJT
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Wow...I'm hooked. A very intriguing beginning.

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Via_Pandalia
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Saint_Grey
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A very promising beginning 👍

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WandererMonk
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interesting start for a story

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Morororo
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Thanks for the chap

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Lizabelle88
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OMG! Poor mother and poor baby! My heart is broken.

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Kydul1137
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Very well written and I think the idea itself leaves many mysteries and unanswered questions, which is good

Divine_Ijandipe
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MasterPizza
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola