Comments of chapter undefined of AGK: King of Insects

Hey just read it, got some suggestions if you wanna read em. I suggest taking those first two chapters off and adding that authors note to the start or end of your first chapter. Now for the writing, it kind of falls flat, like the whole killing father thing should probably be described. Don’t tell show basically. It’s not bad but just take your time, you could have a chapter of introductory stuff so people can get a feel for your main character and his personality and such, rather than him just saying how he is