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Comments of chapter undefined of Mortal Cultivation

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Sacred_Saint
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Kudos

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Tempestous_goddess
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The setting for this chapter is really good. With the chase, station action etc. Good stuff, keep it up.

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commander_pride_21
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Nuce twist. At first I thought that the MC will be San shun guy but it seems it'll be the Wei guy. Or maybe it's gonna be all three!?? hmmm

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FairyGoddess
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Nice

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chinatwain2003
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Good work. Keep it up author nim.

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Cybermonkey
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there are some grammar mistakes but apart from that its alright so far

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GifflarGod
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most realistic mc death ever... and it's not shown in past tense..

VenerableDemon
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Author pls do reply and tell me if the Mc would be a evil, would be massacre and kill for benefit. If yes I'm in

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Saint_of_Harem
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Cheers

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Fallen_Ghost
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💜

Primate
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Excellent opening and transition. 👍

Fallen_Ghost
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Tempestous_goddess
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola