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Cybermonkey10mthReplied to J_S_2998Ch 22 Francis’s Visit- Cybermonkey11mthCommented
jiang is one of the 5 template mc surnames besides lin, ye, su and xiao as we all know but ting? sounds like passerby A in his own story!
"Thank you, grandfather!" Jiang Ting exclaimed, proceeding to eat his dinner. - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
how dumb do u have to be
'Do they have to evaluate our aptitudes too?' - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
wearing such sloppy clothes to a banquet hes aware of is just asking to be pointed out and humiliated befitting of an attentionseeking and pretentious mc who cant get over his own ego i wish someone would write about a mature and unpretentious mc for once
Besides, these young people are prideful and if they see a person wearing such shabby looking clothing like he does, there is a high chance they would think he was some kind of servant who is there to assist them. - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
not role model but idol i assume? im not sure what ur going for either since u specifically mention the "maids" here, it seems more reasonable to go with "idol"
Wang Yue at some point admired Wang Ling's attitude and seriousness. How he never do anything half-hearted was something admirable. He was hard-working, kind, serious, and even handsome. In all seriousness, Wang Ling was becoming a role model for others. - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
thats contradictory, cant really be true if shes a maid for a fool at the end of the day, pls
This young girl who happened to be Wang Ling's current little maid was her little sister. Although she was only adopted by the Wang family, Wang Yue was treated as an actual child of the family. - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
makes for a good villain template tbh
"Curse you, Wang Ling, everything that I have worked for will be destroyed because of your selfishness!! Many will die because of you!!" - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
too exaggerated
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yeah i appreciate writers like u who try smth of their own tbh even tho my comments so far were rather crude u still responded politely to each of them, respect just cause of the great attitude ill continue to read and try to give constructive comments instead keep up the great work bud!
Ch 1 Prologue: Destruction And Rebirth, The Beginning Of A New Era And Generation - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
even his death was so pathetic, now i feel sorry for him for real #when ur only joy in life kills u
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i hope we can get the nonsense over with quick, finding the obvious incoming faceslapping plotlines pretty boring already
‘Don’t test my patience little brother.’ - Cybermonkey1yrCommented
its not bad but there is way too much redundant rambling on...did i just read 2 chapters just for him to make it to the talent test? felt like 3 even couldve sped things up tbh by skipping the posturing and ramblings
Ch 8 Chapter 6- Think Things Through... Can't Be Left Alive!! - Cybermonkey1yrPosted
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thats 3 entire paragraphs describing the sect master id have said its the fml but shes supposed to be his adoptive mom so...a bit weird
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like an elementary school student, mightve aswell tricked him into the mines with a lolipop [img=faceslap]
Eventually, Jiang Beiran survived. He also knew that he had been cheated, and recognized the fact that he had been tricked into an illegal mine by some biscuits. - Cybermonkey1yrReplied to DaoistHCh 1 Immortal Fate
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imagine waking up to a stranger hovering over u in ur room while u were sleeping creepy af...but very romantic in the authors mind
Ye Jiushang sat by the bed and looked at the little girl sleeping soundly. The more he looked at her, the cuter he thought she was. He couldn't help but reach out and gently stroke her face.