the story is great, only the translation a bit confusing, for the 'He' 's and 'She''s part, he for man, she for girl, got mix up.
milk is for milk drink, for addresing the grandmother? the group/little ball for addresing the kid?
addresing the main character's old hu/lin li ye' bit confusing too. but as reader try to understand which is which have to skip a biy too.. hopefully can be better, thank you ๐๐๐ป