WHEN I CANT SEE! ( VERS ENG)

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First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.

I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end. The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.

The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. extraordinary stories. and also interesting to follow. I wonder how Nico's life after he went blind. Oh Nico you so pitty. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. oh ....[img=recommend][img=recommend]

My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!

This novel is so cool! Highly recommended for someone who likes mystery genre. Okay, waiting for the next part, Sis! 🔥❤️[img=update][img=exp]

Keren banget, suka ... Ceritanya bikin aku hanyut terbawa arus ... Karakternya kuat banget, ga sia2 aku mampir ke sini, aaaaa lop lop pokoknya ❤️

Nice story 😍😍😍 😊👍 Really, good job Thor 💜💜💜can't wait for next chapters. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. The story flows and is fun to follow in each chapter.

can't imagine when life undergoes drastic changes, hopefully they can return to live peacefully as before. doesn't lose sight doesn't mean you can lose happiness, I hope this story has a happy ending

Ceritanya keren, alurnya mengalir dan gramernya juga ok. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

This book is very good and interesting, the language style is very cool and easy to understand. This work really impressed me and made me even more excited to read it.

entah kenapa, setiap aku ketemu sama novel bagus tapi pake bahasa English, dan English itu kelemahan ku, tapi tenang. aku akan .membacanya DENGAN mengunakan translate.heheheh

bagus ide ceritanya, penasaran sama kisah nico selanjutnya, semangaaat thor melanjutkan ceritanyaaa 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Oh my Gosh! this is the great story❤️❤️❤️❤️ i love how author describe it the atmosphere, the Chara. it so lively ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

ceritanya keren dan unik enak dibaca dan mudah dipahami setiap tokoh yang main dalam cerita ini menggambarkan keadaan seperti di dunia nyata saja. keren

I really like the story. the author can describe the story really well. but, i feel pity for Nico. keep spirit author .keep up the good work.

The story is good and the writing is also neat. Keep it up, hopefully many will like the story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Interesting plot that this story has. Sure not gonna regret to come by, or even keep going to the end. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

semangad up nya kak, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The story is very interesting, with the beginning of its sad plot. Maybe this will be the reader's attraction to continue until the end. Good job , I hope the author will always be successful in writing the story