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ULLMANthe1APOSTLE
ULLMANthe1APOSTLELv21yr
2023-05-14 05:55

I AM SORRY i am not a fan of NTR I mean I know there's not proper NTR here but i don't like even a hint of it in my reading preference and i don't mean it only from a male character liking pov but also if it's female main character based as I have little psychopathic tendency i like when even if mc does found out then he make her life miserable instantly and not just play with her games. I mean like what's stopping me from shooting a 7mm in both of there's body on my own property. i am rich, just make them vanish from the world i Mean like this World doesn't have mana or ki,qi or any supernatural element to save her or him from me I mean death serve all well and what is there that money can't solve. And don't take me seriously that's how I am. So sorry if it hurts somebody.

WHEN I CANT SEE! ( VERS ENG)

Ayu_Kristin
4.9
139 Chs

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VenomArgus
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First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.

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Pandora_Phantasy
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I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end. The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.

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Rainy_Qiu
Rainy_QiuLv10

The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. extraordinary stories. and also interesting to follow. I wonder how Nico's life after he went blind. Oh Nico you so pitty. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. oh ....[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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aleyshiawein
aleyshiaweinLv10

My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!

2yr
Aisyahelmaharani74
Aisyahelmaharani74Lv1

This novel is so cool! Highly recommended for someone who likes mystery genre. Okay, waiting for the next part, Sis! 🔥❤️[img=update][img=exp]

2yr
Frewnbi_
Frewnbi_Lv1

Keren banget, suka ... Ceritanya bikin aku hanyut terbawa arus ... Karakternya kuat banget, ga sia2 aku mampir ke sini, aaaaa lop lop pokoknya ❤️

2yr
ratnafa
ratnafaLv10

Nice story 😍😍😍 😊👍 Really, good job Thor 💜💜💜can't wait for next chapters. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. The story flows and is fun to follow in each chapter.

2yr
rachma_akbari
rachma_akbariLv3

can't imagine when life undergoes drastic changes, hopefully they can return to live peacefully as before. doesn't lose sight doesn't mean you can lose happiness, I hope this story has a happy ending

2yr
Irma_Asma
Irma_AsmaLv1

Ceritanya keren, alurnya mengalir dan gramernya juga ok. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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