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Irma_Asma
Irma_AsmaLv13yr
2022-02-09 12:10

Ceritanya keren, alurnya mengalir dan gramernya juga ok. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

WHEN I CANT SEE! ( VERS ENG)

Ayu_Kristin
4.9
139 Chs

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ULLMANthe1APOSTLE
ULLMANthe1APOSTLELv2

Reveal spoiler

1yr

VenomArgus
VenomArgusLv14

First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.

2yr
Pandora_Phantasy
Pandora_PhantasyLv1

I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end. The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.

3yr
Rainy_Qiu
Rainy_QiuLv10

The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. extraordinary stories. and also interesting to follow. I wonder how Nico's life after he went blind. Oh Nico you so pitty. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. oh ....[img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
aleyshiawein
aleyshiaweinLv11

My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!

3yr
Aisyahelmaharani74
Aisyahelmaharani74Lv1

This novel is so cool! Highly recommended for someone who likes mystery genre. Okay, waiting for the next part, Sis! 🔥❤️[img=update][img=exp]

3yr
Frewnbi_
Frewnbi_Lv1

Keren banget, suka ... Ceritanya bikin aku hanyut terbawa arus ... Karakternya kuat banget, ga sia2 aku mampir ke sini, aaaaa lop lop pokoknya ❤️

3yr
ratnafa
ratnafaLv10

Nice story 😍😍😍 😊👍 Really, good job Thor 💜💜💜can't wait for next chapters. How pitty a handsome mand like him become blind. The story flows and is fun to follow in each chapter.

3yr
rachma_akbari
rachma_akbariLv3

can't imagine when life undergoes drastic changes, hopefully they can return to live peacefully as before. doesn't lose sight doesn't mean you can lose happiness, I hope this story has a happy ending

3yr
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