Comments of chapter undefined of Ghost Rider in Twilight

love the story and..... I NEEDZ MAWRRRRRRRRRRRR

I was enjoying the story so far, but the MC is falling in love for no reason, that's not a good sign for the future of the story and the level of quality.

Nice. Who wants to bet if this will be first Twilight story that will actually get finished or will it be dropped and forgotten like all the rest.

Him being in the way of the van and having alice save him was too much wasnt needed in the story and your having him fall inlove way to quick turning him into a male bella which is just bad.

he needs balls

Nice chap!! Cant wait for more.

I come for ghosty also i am not a fan of twilight but i like the way everything is going.

firs- darn, forth

Thx for the chap keep the good work

People are complaining how the romance feels rushed and the van scene was unnecessary but this is just how I imagined twilight would be 😂

please more I need more

Great chapter. The romance is coming along just fine to all those people who think it is rushed it isn’t. Alice is obviously just his type so he is attracted to her, he can’t lie in front of Alice since she can hear his heartbeat, and it is obvious to him now that she likes him so it is all the more reason to like her. So while it is fast it isn’t rushed it is the right pace given the circumstances if it was going slower then it would be a problem.

Noice

Era só eu que não estava conseguindo ler?

S.I.M.P

thanks for the chapter

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