The first impression I had was that you were trying to copy Gojo's personality and the result was a caricature. Another point was people's lack of appropriate reaction to the MC's power. The guy creates curses, he can probably create a curse with the same powers as Gojo. He has the potential to create an army of curses on the same level as Gojo The story looks cool, but still needs work.

Apparently smiling is half his personality. You need to work more on his reactions.

I'm going with 3. I don't really like other OCs being involved when the MC is already one

Another normal story of a super competent MC.

This is not your world. It's not your Japan. Stop acting like someone owes you something. I would love it if the King of souls would appear and show the power of a creator God.

You disappeared ? I didn't even notice Baka. Hump. But since you're here, it's best to stick to the schedule. Baka

What a dumb reason to be a hero.

We can only hope. My biggest issue is with the hypocrisy of the MC.

I don't remember, but does that erase her crimes?

She couldn't do anything against the God who did this to her, but she can control how she reacts to it. She is wrong. She chose to be a monster. You do not care? Does that have to do with it being just a story or is that its own moral? RWBY is not a xianxia world. Oz isn't doing this simply because they're different.

I could even agree with you, but we are talking about Salem. How many years has this war been going on? How many cities were destroyed? How many lives were lost? And all this for a petty reason and senseless revenge. This is without considering the long-term effects on society.

No, this one is quite normal. The real pokemon fics are much worse. Most of them are nothing more than an exposition of the authors' fetishes.

It doesn't change the fact that they're still people and he's purposely ignoring that. So what if she doesn't see them as human? That doesn't change the fact that she's wrong. Things only get worse as the MC can't use the same lame excuse, because as someone who travels the multiverse, he has already encountered several other "humans". Not to mention the other intelligent species. In my opinion, Salem is using this excuse to vent hatred. If the MC hadn't fallen in love with her, he would have become her enemy.

Is he complaining? Serious? Hypocritical. Salem has done equally monstrous things, maybe even worse.

The hypocrite talks about arrogance and lets the archer go simply because it would be too easy.

It wasn't until he gained a little power that the "kill" solution moved up the list. What a surprise, the cocky girl who has been taught her whole life that she is better than others has had a change of heart.

Hypocritical. His mother is just as useless. If she weren't a woman, everyone would be on her neck. The author simply chose to focus the hate on the father. So far this story is average.

One day he will look back and feel a lot of shame. But until then? Long live our idiotic, hypocritical MC who is also psychology's wet dream.

Step One: Get Strong Step Two: Save a certain cute fox Third step: to win the heart of said fluffy fox's mother. Fourth step: Help the yokai faction because, apart from the villains, they are usually the ones who get the most screwed. Fifth step: Conquer a certain dark-furred kitten.

You need to improve your grammar.