Apex_Skull
I don’t have much to say about me. Just know this: •You a fan of anime? We cool. •You love well written stories? We buddies now. •Love funny Memes? Even better, we bros now. That’s it, Later. ✌️✌️
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Sure. I’ll definitely find beating a kid satisfying…
No. It felt like it was created just to mock the MC and all the hardwork and victories he’s had since he first started training. An unnecessary beatdown to bring him down to earth even though he wasn’t arrogant in the first place. Although educational (even though it was clearly forced and created to make the MC have a weakness since that’s not how Genjustu works in Naruto.), It still felt really irritating since it felt like Kensei was looking down on him. Overall, really unnecessary but meh, I’ll just take it as another of your useless forced plot.
Great motivation for the poor kid. I loved that.
Like Sakura level bad or first-love level bad.
But wasn’t Itachi a genuis? An exceptional specimen rarely seen? Why are you using that as a basis to give weaker, less talented individuals more chakra to do things they never could do? That’s like taking things from wherever you want and dumping it somewhere without caring for how insane it is and without providing any explanation.
We’ll see about that.
That’s exactly what Danzo does, lol. Strikes when the enemy thinks he’s had him.
Anyone wondering how the gramps has the scroll for the Shadow Clone Justu? Body Flicker Justu, I can understand but Shadow Clone? Isn’t that a Forbidden Rank Justu? How does an old, retired, former Anbu Captain have that?
Tell me something I don’t know without telling me something I don’t know.
“A rational deception to bring out your best.” -Aizawa (MHA)
So much for being able to protect the user from ALL eyes and justu.
The story just goes however the author feels like it. He wants the MC smart, he’ll be ‘smart’. He wants him dumb, he’ll be hella dumb. And this shouldn’t be how it’s supposed to be, the character has to be consistent to their behavior, their selves all through the story unless there’s a character development. Not that the MC changes and goes full on retard whenever the author wants it. That’s just pathetic of the author and rubbish writing. No one’s gonna take the MC seriously like that, knowing he could just all of a sudden change in behavior and act uncharacteristically of him.
Of course you have a ‘plan’. When the MC decided to turn off the Gamers Mind, i immediately knew something was gonna come up and when he didn’t turn it back on for the quest, I immediately knew it was your doing, automatically turning it into forced plot. You could have gone about this in a better way, without making the MC seem like an absolute retard but nooo, the so called ‘plan’ you got had to make things turn out this way. The ‘plan’ may turn out the way you want in the end but it doesn’t change the fact that the way it’s been delivered so far has been garbage.
What the h*ll is this? This is just rubbish writing at this point.
Nice. Immortality, get.