Comments of chapter undefined of Legacies : A Legacy of a Fallen

The story is interesting the sentence formation could be better. But it is nice and interesting keep it up.

This story could be much better if you got the gender of the characters right. He= boy's, she/her= girls

Yo did this dude live where scooby and the gang did?

so malivore didn't sucked his race in? or his father for that matter, letting him run around pregnanating women????? it doesn't make sense even for au, unless of course they used to live on Babylon (or oc dad could magically f**k a woman or he oh so lucky survived malivore), where malivore couldn't get his hands on them, since whether a creature can fly or not doesn't effect malivore suction powers!!!!!

The idea of a fallen angel/demon child going the school is interesting, but you started off with the most cliche intro ever, it was completely predictable.

moooooorrrrrreeee

nice chapter

thx for the chap

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

y the baby boy, just baby is good, isn't it.

Such a long chapter, a great start

Thank you for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

Fff

What is tvd

Thanks for the chapter

Dam

amazing