Reviews of The Chronicles of Vali Masters (Originals/Dimension Hopping SI)

This right here Ladies and Gentlemen was the Original Saucy MuthaF***a. Vali was a fun character and he was my first Evil Self Insert and it was Glorious Sadly we don't ever get MCs like Vali usually.

pleasant surprise very good I did not have height hopes but i loved it read it all in 1 week liked it so much. keep up the good work. good stuff

it's a new concept, a manipulative MC like that, but it's still wonderful... the writing has some mistakes, but mostly impeccable (sometimes in conversations, after the MC compels people, the conversation gets a little unreal but it's okay understand). and the part of TVD with it interfering with everything is kind of not very cool because it's kind of repetitive with the original TVD but I'm enjoying it

Gostei muito do universo tvd, só não gostei muito dele matando a serva dele(esqueci o nome dela), eu tinha gostado dela, ela podia ter mais aparições na fanfic. Não gostei muito da ideia de multiverso nessa fanfic, por isso li só até o universo tvd, tava muito bom 👍

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It's a good fiction. Everything is almost ok but lacks in story development.

pls change the picture it looks gay...and stupid. fhhfbhrvvsejncfyhcfhbfrfjutgfrybfrhjrqqtyuijhvddsrghgffggggggggfdfghjhffdtggfgbfhcthfghfghfy

hello. ur fan-fic(vali version) is one of the best i've ever read. i couldn't stop reading it, it took me tha whole night to read it. not like tha others. the conclusion is epic . thanks.

Really really really loved it till, the nerf and really the compulsion, of all the abilities you had to pick compulsion. Otherwise loved it but guess it is my time to go, Good luck though.

pleasant surprise very good had already read elsewhere rereading .............................................................................................