CrimsonWolfAuthor
dear author... i like that your thoughtful of your fans opinions and are willing to even give us a reason for why you're writing the way that you are but please keep it as their opinion only and don't let it truly affect your style and your plot we love your work or people wouldn't get so amped up with their thoughts and opinions personally I'm very happy with the way the story is developing it's nice to see the slow progression versus the instant and hope for many many more beautiful chapters and volumes to come...
Its not like i dislik his hero personality its just that he keeps contradicting what he says. in the beginning u mentioned that he has become a tyrant after inheriting he will of the snake and that he has matured. however he gets too emotional and proceeds to become a hero based on his impulsive emotions and proceeds to contradict his words to work only to benefit him. i hope that what you said will come in the future that when he truly experience that good and the bad of both sides of the coin then he will truly become an anti hero without being a hypocrite. i was truly excited in the early chapters on how he will mature and trust no one like he said; that he will be a cautious, cunning, and ruthless person to survive in the so cold dog eats dog world.
If the author is pressured by comments into rectifying his writing i feel people have gone the wrong way about it in the way they posted their opinion, People stay objective with your opinion @author i personally liked the development for Kahn but would hope for a little more descriptive "action/fighting" :D