Comments of chapter undefined of The Bored Immortal

Thanks for the chapter.

252 chapters in. The buildup was intense cuz you made her a hateful character. The first 90 chapters were a buildup of hate. But it didn't stop there. Slowly, cuz how much she had hid from him got revealed, it further increased my dissatisfaction towards her, cuz I couldn't buy your reason behind her actions, the alternative seemed a better option. Now, this would have been still good if the payoff was satisfying. If she had suffered some consequences before reconciliation and then deeply regretted her actions, maybe then it would have eased some of my dissatisfaction. But, what I hoped for, and what you promised didn't happen. It got resolved too easily, just because Viktor told her the past story of his wife. He could've told her that in the past. Immature people can still understand simple truths. I just want to say, the more intense buildup you make, the more satisfying the payoff has to be. As her problem got resolved too easily, it wasn't satisfying. Hope this will help you in future.

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thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter author-sama. At least in this chapter he got a clue about some things, I'm looking forward in him regaining his memories back. I just hope this wouldn't drag on for too long, since there are many entities that could threaten him and I find him weak in his current capabilities. I think if he really wanted to help taya he could do so by learning and researching together with her or something, or studying magic that could turn the physical law of the world upside down. I hope he wouldn't be too clueless for long.

I'm actually not all that dissatisfied with the development, like, it's not a self insert although the majority of us like to do so, including me in the earlier stages of reading novels, so i totally understand how and why the plot progressed like this, and why Vik forgave her without making things hard for here after seeing her crying like that, how her bratty self could do such an unwise thing especially with Viktor and her having a fight over the immortality topic, so with Immortal Vik getting overwhelmed and disappearing for 2 decades in the spur of the moment, it's logical for the development to go as such, but sth feels missing in these 2 chapters that leaves one unsatisfied, not in a negative way tho...more like, i expected more...drama? idk, cuz I'm not a fan of drama myself, but it felt as if the emotions weren't conveyed well enough or something, i really can't describe it well... Good work overall tho, really good and chill novel, loved all the characters, especially Umi/Sae if i had to pick a favorite [img=recommend][img=update]

She probably can’t say anything because she is under a magic contract