Ograhon
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I don't know about others, but for me to enjoy it, you need to break your sentence into paragraphs. I was drowned by the synopsis but I couldn't pass chapter one.
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Just limit the number of words per chapter and break the paragraphs. Rest is perfect. I like this story.
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Wow! what a well crafted chapter and book...good work