mrant12
Okay I would not be surprised if this novel wins WSA. No, I mean like for real. It has all the ingredients to win it AND the writing is publication quality. 5star does not do it justice. 1. Writing quality: PAR EXCELLENCE. NO typos, grammatical errors. Vocabulary congruent to the story and setting. And words are lucid and not unnecessarily convoluted. Flows easily. 2. Stability of Updates: stable lol 3. Story development: superb pacing. Doesn't dawdle, gets into the thick of things right away without compromising the pacing. Very very interesting twist on the transmigration/system genre and you do not have to be a fan of the genre to like it, you will like it either way. There are the elements of an epic story that you will know about pretty early. Also, political conflict is there, which makes it even better for me. lol. 4. Character Design: Superb simply. The MC only really interacts with the system but you can already tell he will be a fun MC to follow. Fun and brave, the elements of a perfect hero. And the heroine is compelling too. :D 5. World Background: Superb. Beautifully explained by the system without making it sound weary and expositional. REALLY GREAT WORK. Will definitely stay in my library. I cannot wait for Alex and Archmage to speak with each for the first time.
Man!!! This is a wild ride! I can see such world building and detailed writing reach 2000+ chapters if continued properly. I also like the comedy here and there and the feeling of the characters having their own personalities being portrayed during exchanges. I could feel myself reading Lord of the Rings or Game of Thrones again. Nice job!!! Keep it up!
Absolutely amazing. The author has done an amazing job all round so far, and i do hope this level of writing continues as the book progresses. Excellent writing quality. No grammatical errors I could see and the selection of words used made the story seem very free flowing. It's too early to judge story development, but from what I've read so far, it's clear it has massive potential. The characters are easy to follow and written well, each unique and we'll suited to the roles the author has set out for them. And the world background. Very well crafted world and understanding how it works has been made very easy thanks to the author. Keep up the good work.
For someone who have read alot of novel books from the classics of HG Wells 'War of the Worlds' to the contemporary sci fi debut of Liu Cixin 'Three Body Problem', i must say this writer has a very promising career ahead of him. From Character developments to the vivid details of the environment, nothing is left out in the writing. Of course, the plot is intriguing and will surely leave the readers spellbound. Cant wait for the next chapter to be released!
Not bad, not bad at all. The premise was interesting and I didnt feel bored. The overall writing quality was decent and there weren't flaws that struck me as 'glaring'. Though the pacing was steady for most of the first chapter it did feel a little iffy at certain parts but I guess that could very well be a deliberate thing from the author. This is a good read and if you've stumbled in here wondering whether you should read this or not, the answer is, yes, you should.
This novel is well written, catches you right from the start, and makes you wonder what will happen next. I would say author writes lots of details and explanation to help you understand the situation. Love that it is about Alexander The Great! Only suggestion is too much information at the start may turn readers off. BUT! I suggest you give it a read! It is entertaining and fun.
It's a pretty cool twist on history mixed with sci-fi stuff. I do like how you build the world the story takes place and the characters are well-written, well-balanced, and well-fleshed out. It's an interesting premise executed very well and I do believe this is a book I would recommend to sci-fi fans. Great work!
I get hooked reading the first chapter, the author does a great job of portraying the mc as a charismatic character. World background? hum. Kinda irked me how the universal empires only consisted of about 1500 planets, like I mean wouldn't that be more of a galactic scale? Maybe I'm just overthinking it, maybe the term 'universal' describes how massive the civilization is, either way, can't wait to see how everything unravels.
For me to give it a five star! It means I LOVE IT! I'm the worst of all picky readers and I know it so please, if you have been thinking of reading it then get down to business and if you have not been... common give it a try I swear you would not regret it... And It's the character development for me... such a wonderful story, I swear word can't even describe what I want to say