The beginning is a little rush is better to take it slow. Also don't make every girl to immediately fall love with the mc. But so far the fanfiction got potential.
Randomly adds The Flash which makes zero sense and just three the entire story into nonense. Just forced and ruined the story.... fix the title if you are going to have a DC/Marvel fanfic. Never read/found a fic where both universes actually worked or was completed. Just a waste of reading the first 17 chapters.
You first got my curiosity now you have my full attension.................................................................... keep up the good work
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Whelp, at first I thought this story was amazing. And it was, at first, in the begging but then the story became worse and worse. And the bad writing quality does not help either.
would have been a great story if not for the freaking harem. sucks to see so much potential going down the drain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
trash just trash .
It was very good but author needed conflict. He made it be making Mc forget stuf. All this drama could have been avoided. Mc randomly discovered that he cant use full power and had to die to remake his body. Stalling tactic by author to create bad situation for Mc to fix...
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This is epic!!!! I've only red a few chapters but I love it already. I also love how he made his own starlabs and watchtower, can't wait for other references from DC or something else. Keep it up Author, ur the best๐ฆพ๐ฆพ.....
The MCs girls get with 4 big guys and MC becomes a cuck and wears the green hat.
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This novel need exposure one of the best novel I have read on this platform I won't be explaining the novel but will suggest to have a read you won't be disappointed.
The story and the idea behind it was actually the best Iโve seen compared to others on this app. The story development was excellent and overall was very good, but thatโs really only until like chapter 55 I think? where he came back after his death. After that I donโt really see how the story can continue to maintain the good trend and you can tell itโs starting to deteriorate because it has harem. Itโs not like Iโm hating on it because I donโt like when thereโs harem in the story or anything, but the authors trying too hard to please the fans or what not and starts to forget to make the characters feel like an actual character and just start throwing them into the harem and making the story predictable from a mile away.
Awesome start! I like that you have made your group go their own way. I like that you are putting a proper plan together for the future which gives you so many options story wise. keep it up.
Nice dude, one of the best marvel fan fiction. Keep it up and don't dropped.........................................................................................................................
Great start man. I love the team. It is pretty op. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..
It is extremely rushed for no reason and lacks any sort of worldbuilding, details, plot and meaningful progression.
I'm going to give it 3.8 as I'm not really giving it a chance to read it as I read the first few chapter's and there's bad grammar and it's not a viltrumite in marvel but a dude who somehow gets the powers and he's not a transmigrator or anything but he's just some guy and it seems to be a harem (I didn't far enough to see a single Romance let alone it be a harem yet) but that doesn't bother me but it's kinda just obvious as he's In a cell with all these around females and he gets the knowledge of the powers from some kind of flashbacks and also it seems to be he got kidnapped out of nowhere but it's strange as how did they know about his genes like is he a actual mutant who has the powers but then if thats the case how did he get the powers and that's kinda something that raises questions, is he a mutant with the powers of viltrumite or is he a legit viltrumite and if he is a viltrumite then what implications is it? like is viltrum here? is omni man here? has a viltrumite been assigned to earth? how strong are you? mark and his dad nolan are unique viltrumites as omni man nolan are one of the strongest viltrumites around and mark is also a very strong viltrumite and they killed tons of viltrumites together. so how strong is he? average viltrumite? or strong like mark and nolan? weak for a viltrumite but real strong for people? now if viltrum exist in this world with a ton of viltrumites then do they know about the mc here? like there's a lot of questions. probably would have gotten the answers if I stuck around but hey I wasn't coming back so now if someone has the time to read all of this it'd be some questions for them to ask if they decide to read this. I bet there going to act like all viltrumites are strong like mark and nolan so in the authors mind he'd make our dude strong like mark or stronger and if it's weaker then he'd be "nerfing" him. it'd be bs if he made him on par with nolan as nolan is very old and it'd still be bs if he was on par with mark real quick but it's cool I won't be there to complain. now you go complain if he gets equal to nolan without at least hundreds of years. he took thousands but he's a mc so hundreds is understandable.
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