Great start man. I love the team. It is pretty op. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..
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The beginning is a little rush is better to take it slow. Also don't make every girl to immediately fall love with the mc. But so far the fanfiction got potential.
Randomly adds The Flash which makes zero sense and just three the entire story into nonense. Just forced and ruined the story.... fix the title if you are going to have a DC/Marvel fanfic. Never read/found a fic where both universes actually worked or was completed. Just a waste of reading the first 17 chapters.
You first got my curiosity now you have my full attension.................................................................... keep up the good work
I'm a bit weirded out because you can't see those haters commonly seen in every novel. 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Whelp, at first I thought this story was amazing. And it was, at first, in the begging but then the story became worse and worse. And the bad writing quality does not help either.
would have been a great story if not for the freaking harem. sucks to see so much potential going down the drain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
trash just trash .
It was very good but author needed conflict. He made it be making Mc forget stuf. All this drama could have been avoided. Mc randomly discovered that he cant use full power and had to die to remake his body. Stalling tactic by author to create bad situation for Mc to fix...
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This is epic!!!! I've only red a few chapters but I love it already. I also love how he made his own starlabs and watchtower, can't wait for other references from DC or something else. Keep it up Author, ur the best🦾🦾.....
A war veteran and an anime fan as well, he got into anime by watching it with his grandson after his retirement, his grandson loved pokemon and so did he also came to like this world of pokemon where people didn't kill each other and people used to have fun with there pokemon, after watching Pokemon with his grandson and playing with him all day he got back his childhood which he could never experience due to the cruel war, and as of now our MC has turned 82 years old he was very satisfied with his life with no regrets and waiting for death to take him away but will death be is end or will it start a new beginning, a new legend. __________________________ Support me on Patreon - https://www.patreon.com/zarakh
(T/N: There is now a Patreon for this work, and any new work I add will be dropped there first. check it out for an early release of up to 30 chapters edited smoothly. https://www.patreon.com/INeedRest) Ps: I'm not the original writer for this, this was edited by me. ******************* Traveling to the world of Hokage, Kamiyo Colt witnessed the chaos of the Nine Tails firsthand. Without any special powers initially, he planned to develop quietly and survive until the Infinite Tsukuyomi. However, when he first trained his Chakra, his system finally activated. The system's rules were simple: By healing others, he could gain random attributes and skills. "Heal Uzumaki Naruto to receive pure Ashura Chakra!" "Heal Uchiha Shisui to gain his bloodline talent!" "Heal Sasuke Uchiha to obtain pure Indra Chakra!" In this way, Colt steadily developed his abilities over more than ten years. During the Fourth Ninja World War, when the ninja coalition saw him suddenly knock out the Six Paths Madara with a single punch, he looked innocently back at them. "What? I'm a medical ninja. Doesn't it make sense to defeat him with one punch?"
A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews complaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.
Disclaimer All copyrighted content is the property of its respective owner(s). Welcome to previous readers who have read the Gamer Path series thus far. This would be No.4 of Gamer Path, starting with a new MC after the previous one. The story tells of this path that opens to the world of heroes, vigilantes, or villains. The danger is constant, always filled with those in power doing as they please. How will the blank soul named Ren Yuki handle this new world with no personal memories of his other life other than general knowledge of this new world being this world GAMER filled with people with superpowers? "Time to go beyond... PLUS ULTRA!"
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He was just walking along, had a fall, blacked out... and woke up with the Player System. Instead of a fresh start as a hero, a villain, or a wealthy figure in high society, he finds himself in his favorite comic universe—DC—as an unknown rookie cop freshly assigned to Gotham City. ... Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters or the fanfic i was merely translating this. If you are the rightful owner and want it taken down, I will do it immediately. Ps: Ccto to the book cover's owner... Original Author: Alex31 Original Title: Игрок DC: Крутой легавый. (Player DC: Hot Fuzz)
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