Hey readers, Hope you like my story. It's a fantasy female lead novel. It begins with the girl's family and her being captured. She then found herself having two best friends who meant the world to her and they faced a lot of problems together and stood up for each other. In the end, when it was time to choose love or friendship or power, what would she choose? There are a lot of interesting plots in the novel. If you like my novel, please review it and support my novel. And also vote it to encourage me, you know there are a lot of times just because of lack of encouragement, most novels are not finished. So please support me.
The novel is very interesting and I didn't get bored after the first chapter, the character Breta is very funny...well at least she is to me, her character is so not normal 😁 I mean she's kinda strange and humorous. The novel keeps on getting fascinating especially the scene where she's wiped out of the memory of her family members...😬 that part put me on the edge...total page turner,keep up the good work.
First of all, the writing quality is really mature and it's descriptive as well. I don't mind a chapter a week so the stability of updates is fine according to me. The story has potential. If you start reading, you can tell that it's developing pretty well. The main character is the best thing in the story. I fell in love with Breta from the beginning. She is a powerful female lead. The background is described well too. So I guess this one deserves five stars overall. And also I can't stop reading the story.
This story is captivating with its realistic and mysterious atmosphere. There isn't boring info dump that breaks the continuity of the story. The story has a nice pacing and flow to it. The suspense sure kept me on my toes. And the characters. They are round, dynamic, and believable! They feel realistic to me. Bravo!
This has a very unique storyline and it's very interesting. Story has enough amount of suspense and thrill in it to keep you hooked for long time. And I loved the character of Breta, she is a very well written. Apart from suspense and thrill and story, author had also done a great job at maintaining the humor. And in short I really enjoyed reading it!
This novel really had great potential. I am also an author and this is a bit familiar with the story I recently worked on but this story had more conflict and intensity. Which is very good and interesting. I can easily imagine the conflict through the writing which is very helpful for me who is a fast reader. Keep up the good work!