Cyberpunk Junkie • Gore Enthusiast • Anime Addict She/Her || 17
An absolutely beautiful story! Incredibly well written with lovable characters and an intriguing plot. I have not yet finished reading this, but I plan on doing so in between school and exams. The visuals and flow of the story simply can't be outmatched. I truly believe this belongs on the shelf of a bookstore despite not being fully caught up on the chapters. I look forward to reading more and diving further into the world the author has built. Love it!
Really love how this is written!
Thank you for catching that! I mistype often and miss my mistakes even when proofreading. Thanks for the help!!
Although this story isn't the genre that I typically read, I found myself invested in the story and characters from the beginning. The pacing is quite nice as well and helps the story flow smoothly while keeping the reader intrigued. Nice work!
I'm really enjoying this so far! Writing a good hook that draws your readers in can be difficult, but the writer definitely hit the nail on the head with this one. My attention was caught within the first paragraph and the following events continued to pull me in. I look forward to reading more!
Well well well...looks like I'm writing a review, huh? This story has been in the works for over four years and has been changed a number of times. I've considered stepping away from it, but I am so attached to the characters and storyline that I can't let this project go even if I have no motivation to write for it. My main reason for why this is my favorite piece I'm working on is the MC herself. Arwen Hawthorne is an unruly girl with a taste for battle and a tendency to swear like a sailor. Someone as reckless as she fits very well in the fast-paced universe known as the Dreamscape, but due to her resentment toward accepting fate, Arwen finds herself struggling to get a grip on reality. Nevertheless, she puts her best foot forward the moment she realizes she is needed as an Oneiroi soldier and begins her new life in another world. I am still working on adding visuals, but I will guarantee you that the weaponry and tech in this story is part of what makes it so exciting to write. "The Dreamscape: One" combines a cyberpunk setting with elements of horror, action, and mythology to create a comedic origin story of a morally grey heroine. Still not convinced? Well then, I'll have to show you the story's top tier waifus some other time. For the meanwhile, why don't you give this a read?