Very gripping with an intriguing protagonist. I love interesting female leads and the protagonist of this novel does not disappoint. Great writing quality as well!

I like this protagonist already all because of this paragraph right here.

I was afraid people would find Kenji boring at first haha. And, yeah, in some aspects, he may not be an in-your-face character like I'm used to writing. Though, the main plot of this novel is Kenji's transformation and self discovery, so hopefully my readers are willing to stick around to see his development.

Thank you for leaving a comment! Chapter comments help me see what I need to work on and improve as an author. However, may I ask how you found the situation unrealistic and annoying?

kinda sus

An absolutely beautiful story! Incredibly well written with lovable characters and an intriguing plot. I have not yet finished reading this, but I plan on doing so in between school and exams. The visuals and flow of the story simply can't be outmatched. I truly believe this belongs on the shelf of a bookstore despite not being fully caught up on the chapters. I look forward to reading more and diving further into the world the author has built. Love it!

Oh goodness, I've fallen in love with Nyx too...

First impression— the relationship between Kalani and Whistle is absolutely adorable. I think I've fallen in love with these characters already, not to mention the beautiful writing style!

Really love how this is written!

You'll find that out soon ;)

Thank you for catching that! I mistype often and miss my mistakes even when proofreading. Thanks for the help!!

Although this story isn't the genre that I typically read, I found myself invested in the story and characters from the beginning. The pacing is quite nice as well and helps the story flow smoothly while keeping the reader intrigued. Nice work!

I'm really enjoying this so far! Writing a good hook that draws your readers in can be difficult, but the writer definitely hit the nail on the head with this one. My attention was caught within the first paragraph and the following events continued to pull me in. I look forward to reading more!