Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated as Jon Snow with Wishes
Reincarnated as Jon Snow with Wishes
Perusing_Gypsy
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Thx for the chapter , just my opinion but I don’t think you should do an AI bc it ruins the game of thrones immersion and for the spy network if u completely destroy everybody’s spies they’ll just get even more suspicious it’s better to control them to send back false info so the other houses don’t know something has changed
I don’t see why you need to subvert servants and spies to your cause. Your MC could just as easily teleport to the Red Keep while invisible and overwrite the minds of the king, Varys, Baelish, and Cersei. There is no reason for him to wait for canon to start, considering that he will have powers rivaling a demi-god by that time. If he does wait, your story will just drag on and you will be rehashing the original. The only people that can be a problem for him will be his aunt after she hatches her dragons(she shares some kind of mental connection with them) and the red priestess. The latter will probably be impossible to convert considering her magic, and most importantly since she is practically a vessel for her god in this world. She will act as R'hllor instructs her, so trusting her to be an ally is whimsical if not impossible. I doubt her god will allow someone with powers like your MCs’ to even exist. The same can be said for the Three-Eyed Raven and some others that have connections to the various gods and beings. Especially if they have some precognitive ability. As far as “harem” or a single relationship, I would suggest - neither. No one can match him in knowledge, power, lifespan, and many other things in this world. There is little possibility to get in love with someone so far from you in terms of abilities. He can only create one. Be it an AI or giving abilities to someone, but that still won’t make them equal. He will be like a god to them and I find that strange and unlikely to lead to true love. That doesn’t exclude a sexual relationship with some of them, though. ;) My suggestion will be for him to get as much knowledge and experience from the locals, to visit old Valarie and the rest of the world, and after the defeat of the White walkers, to find or create a ritual to travel in a different reality or world. In another reality, he might have an opportunity for a more equal relationship, and some real challenges. Somethings that your story will need considering how overpowered your MC is even as a baby. It is your story, however, so take my thoughts are the suggestions they are. Thanks, and I will be waiting for your next update!
This is really good so far I’m really enjoying it thank you for sharing your ideas and your story. Only thing I would give the devices kill off the Bolton’s seize the land for Stark. You don’t have a port that’s directly controlled by your house. Also I would make sure that Ned changes his last name since if he’s not going to the wall like Ben he cannot be a stark. Or at least Rob has to be named something other than Stark. Please don’t give Ned The moat remembered Rob is half Tully and the moat is the key to the north I would carve a part of the land from the Bolton‘s and give that to Ned.
