Carrots123
Hey Carrots i have an idea for a story: The story is about the very first Amazon to come into existence. Here's the twist, the first Amazon was actually a man. Now here's a little backstory: When the Greek goddesses came together to create the Amazon's at first they wanted the Amazon's to be men because they already had an idea that men were going to "Rule" the world so they wanted a group of men that were under their command, so they created the first male Amazon out of clay or whatever they made the amazons out of. They wanted to make the Amazon's to be perfect men so they built him to be handsome, strong, brave, smart, protective towards women, heroic etc. However, after they created the body and gave the blessings towards it they changed their minds and decided to make women instead, they had to represent for women, so they tossed away the male amazon clay statue. However, after he was tossed away the male amazon was given life and started travelling the world. Also, what makes him special is that when he was created by the goddesses, they forgot to place limitations on him, so theoretically he can become the strongest being in all of DC comics and since he has no limits on him body, mind and spirit he can't die either, so he's as immortal as Vandal Savage. He ends up becoming the first hero in DC that basically becomes a symbol throughout history thanks to all the virtues that were placed on him by the goddesses to be the perfect man and be honourable towards women so obviously the ladies love him. That's basically my idea, the reason why I'm bothering you with it is because i don't know much about DC so i though since you have two stories that have DC backgrounds, you could probably make use of my idea. If you don't want to take the idea then just don't comment on it. Hope to see more of your Thor and Kryptonian stories. Bye!
Thanks for the chapter and for the harem: Faora, Wonder Woman and her mother, Atlanna (Queen of Atlantis) before she met Aquaman father, Mera, Hawkwoman, Lena Luther, Mercy Grave (Lex luther bodyguard), Barbara Gordon, Ms. Martian, Raven, Artemis Crock, Zatanna, Talia al Ghul, Poison Ivy, Catwoman, Harley Quinn, Cheetah, Lois Lane, Black Canary, Lady Shiva, Rose Wilson.
I have a few questions at first, but reading all previous comments and your replies answered all of it. I just have a suggestion or criticism, not sure about the others, but for me the way your wrote a literal "Line Break" breaks immersion for me. You should have just opt for the lines or something similar to denote borders between cut-scenes instead of literally writing Line Break. I think reading experience would be better if you do. Anw, thanks for the chapter. I've been wanting to read a good DC mainly fic in a long while already. Hope this fic of yours finally quench my search for one.