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My rating of this book is passable at best.I am an avid reader of ff, because of that especially in this website only few fanfic stories impressed me.in every story what reader concentrate on is the mc, if the autbor develop him well, the story will go well, if not then the story will turn up to be a disappointment.from the summary, you stated that you mc is a reincarnator, doesn't have a memory if the world that he found himself in is irrelevent but as someone who has backround kbowldege, he should have a selfworth and show independance, something that I never see.he is being tortured for years and despite that he never shown any or even the barest thought of revenge in the 19 chapters that I read.what kind of main character is this?pathetic and desappointed to the highest degree.
of course he should live.technically he died because of his own stupidity, he is too much like Naruto full of dream and sunshine, surviving for few weaks will allow him to see the horror of war, it will allow him to devolop as a character amd make him take his carreer seriously.Also what's the point of bringing him if you ll kill him.canon stories became too boring.I hope for new things
well, first of all I want to thank me for compeleting all those chapters in one go.I want to thank me for the dedecation and the will and the patience that I shown during reading this story.I want to thank me for never quitting despite how slow paced the story is, and how incompetent the mc is, despite deing a reincarnator with metaknowledge.and I want to thank all of the people who are reading this story and say "May god be with you"
the mc strenght is unresonnableelite jonin to kage level????absurd, elite chounin to tabaco jonin is acceptable but your raiting is too highhe is an 8 years old, there is a limit to how much chakra hr can have to boost his physical strength and there is a limit to how much strength he body can have.
hokage??????????? hhhhhh as the the elders will give the hokage position to an uchiha, I believe you mean clan head
hmmmI am out personally I found that this story ended when you made the justice league, a banch of hypocrits and you took a derection when the mc and the league will become enimies.I hoped for things to improve but it did not.there is no proper direction to the story.the mc creating enemies right and left.he has a metaknowledge, I expected him to use his mind more that his muscles.
well to tell the truth, the idea of the story, the plot and eapecially the mc ability are amazing. But what made me give low rating to the story is mc pathetic development and his uncreative way of using his power. we have seen the mc only blaming himslef for his weaknesses over and over. he never traied for searching for a new way of applying his ability, learning new things that can support his team. thr mc fpr example have the power to control others, why he didn't use for weak cursed spirits and used them for gathering information for example. why he didn't use his abilities to force a packts against cursed spirits to gain their energy when he defeat them for example? you give your mc a very powerful ability, but you nerfed to a degree that made it useless, by doing so you nerfed your mc. I believe that this story has potential but it need more work.
when can we expect an update?
hooo it s interesting development i liked this chapter and i am interested in how things will develop, i can see that things will end with deathstroke death. but the important question is how will the league and his team react? I hope that their reaction will be reasonable not like many other fics when they make their characters 2 dimensional.
it s interesting I liked what i read from what i can understand, the actors of our world don t exist here, so why not make them exist but as a normal people and make the mc introduce them to acting. i believe that in story like this, using existing actors, real ones is better than ocs.
I have great dislike for this chapter, great dislike for this internal problems, conflict between THORS, totally unnecessary, ok I understand that everyone has his own ideas how to free Adgard, BUT THIS!!!!! I hoped that this stupid event will end here with the first Thor great wisdom and power, but it's not done and I can predict that this evil THOR will create many problems in the future. Believe me when I say that this version of Thor story begin to turn to great disappointment compared to the first version. V1 was very impressive piece of work, you decided to abandoned it, I did disagree but I respected the choice and hoped that this story will be better, but with every chapter I grew to dislike this story more and more especially in the last chapters and truthfully I do not know if I'll continue to read it.