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GSHURA

GSHURA

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I like reading stories with badass MC

2018-06-16 JoinedTunisia
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA6d
    Commented

    nice but too short

    Ch 35 Chapter 34 Aftermath
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA29d
    Commented

    a imprtant question? why anakyn never used his power and the technology to heal himself? with all the power and technology that he had, his unability to heal himself is a big question

    Ch 11 Chapter 11 - Come again?
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    Darth Vader in Marvel
    Movies · TryingMyBest
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA3mth
    Commented

    gg

    https://www.ddxs.com/muyekaijuronghewutiaowu/ [木叶,开局融合五条悟] if you have problems with the link, look for it by name, it is chapter 70.
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    Konoha, Gojo Satoru
    Anime & Comics · Pepetimbo_32412323
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA4mth
    Posted

    My rating of this book is passable at best.I am an avid reader of ff, because of that especially in this website only few fanfic stories impressed me.in every story what reader concentrate on is the mc, if the autbor develop him well, the story will go well, if not then the story will turn up to be a disappointment.from the summary, you stated that you mc is a reincarnator, doesn't have a memory if the world that he found himself in is irrelevent but as someone who has backround kbowldege, he should have a selfworth and show independance, something that I never see.he is being tortured for years and despite that he never shown any or even the barest thought of revenge in the 19 chapters that I read.what kind of main character is this?pathetic and desappointed to the highest degree.

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    Zenin's Last Plan:
    Anime & Comics · DaoistJIIvmp
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA4mth
    Commented

    i don't like where you taking this story.i am out

    Ch 54 End of Volume 1: Hidden Invetory XI: Repercussions
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    Rinnegan in JJk
    Anime & Comics · David_555
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA4mth
    Commented

    of course he should live.technically he died because of his own stupidity, he is too much like Naruto full of dream and sunshine, surviving for few weaks will allow him to see the horror of war, it will allow him to devolop as a character amd make him take his carreer seriously.Also what's the point of bringing him if you ll kill him.canon stories became too boring.I hope for new things

    AN - The Senju lives?
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    Naruto: A Different Time
    Anime & Comics · DesMark
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA4mth
    Commented

    first of all tha ks for the chapteri am greatly enjoying the story.For slade, kill him or not? I do not know but make sure to make him pay a heavy price for being a enemy of the gojo siblings.

    Ch 22 Choice made
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    As Satoru Gojo in the DC Universe
    Anime & Comics · Ekisdaiou
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA5mth
    Commented

    well, first of all I want to thank me for compeleting all those chapters in one go.I want to thank me for the dedecation and the will and the patience that I shown during reading this story.I want to thank me for never quitting despite how slow paced the story is, and how incompetent the mc is, despite deing a reincarnator with metaknowledge.and I want to thank all of the people who are reading this story and say "May god be with you"

    Ch 165 CH_5.22 (165)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA5mth
    Commented

    arai development and the fight itself has left much to be desired especially as arai has some meta knowledge.TOTALLY DISAPPOINTED

    Ch 73 Shibuya VIII
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: The Contractor
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA5mth
    Commented

    the mc strenght is unresonnableelite jonin to kage level????absurd, elite chounin to tabaco jonin is acceptable but your raiting is too highhe is an 8 years old, there is a limit to how much chakra hr can have to boost his physical strength and there is a limit to how much strength he body can have.

    Ch 18 Uchiha Clan Meeting! Part-1
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    Naruto: A Different Time
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA5mth
    Commented

    hokage??????????? hhhhhh as the the elders will give the hokage position to an uchiha, I believe you mean clan head

    'According to how much Koichi had been bragging about him, he should be close to Fugaku's strength now... if I don't deal with him now he not only would hinder Fugaku's path to Hokage, but he might lose control over the Uchiha Police force.' Daisuke sighed as he got ready to speak.
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    Naruto: A Different Time
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA7mth
    Commented

    hmmmI am out personally I found that this story ended when you made the justice league, a banch of hypocrits and you took a derection when the mc and the league will become enimies.I hoped for things to improve but it did not.there is no proper direction to the story.the mc creating enemies right and left.he has a metaknowledge, I expected him to use his mind more that his muscles.

    Ch 40 Chapter - 38
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    Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA9mth
    Posted

    well to tell the truth, the idea of the story, the plot and eapecially the mc ability are amazing. But what made me give low rating to the story is mc pathetic development and his uncreative way of using his power. we have seen the mc only blaming himslef for his weaknesses over and over. he never traied for searching for a new way of applying his ability, learning new things that can support his team. thr mc fpr example have the power to control others, why he didn't use for weak cursed spirits and used them for gathering information for example. why he didn't use his abilities to force a packts against cursed spirits to gain their energy when he defeat them for example? you give your mc a very powerful ability, but you nerfed to a degree that made it useless, by doing so you nerfed your mc. I believe that this story has potential but it need more work.

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    Jujutsu Kaisen: The Contractor
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA1yr
    Commented

    nice

    Ch 1 Chapter 001. First Step
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA1yr
    Commented

    very interesting story, really. will you do any kind of stories like this especially the breaker??????

    Ch 19 Chapter 23
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    Lee of the Wild (Girls of the Wild X The Breaker)
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA1yr
    Commented

    when can we expect an update?

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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA2yr
    Commented

    first of all, thanks for the chapter. An important question: who is the protagonist of this story? and are we in the DC or Marvel?

    Ch 2 Monstrous Talent
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    Marvel's Evolution
    Anime & Comics · Carrots123
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA2yr
    Commented

    hooo it s interesting development i liked this chapter and i am interested in how things will develop, i can see that things will end with deathstroke death. but the important question is how will the league and his team react? I hope that their reaction will be reasonable not like many other fics when they make their characters 2 dimensional.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: Darkness Rising
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    Maelstrom Of DC
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA2yr
    Commented

    it s interesting I liked what i read from what i can understand, the actors of our world don t exist here, so why not make them exist but as a normal people and make the mc introduce them to acting. i believe that in story like this, using existing actors, real ones is better than ocs.

    Ch 15 Chapter 15
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    My Hollywood System
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  • GSHURA
    GSHURA2yr
    Commented

    I have great dislike for this chapter, great dislike for this internal problems, conflict between THORS, totally unnecessary, ok I understand that everyone has his own ideas how to free Adgard, BUT THIS!!!!! I hoped that this stupid event will end here with the first Thor great wisdom and power, but it's not done and I can predict that this evil THOR will create many problems in the future. Believe me when I say that this version of Thor story begin to turn to great disappointment compared to the first version. V1 was very impressive piece of work, you decided to abandoned it, I did disagree but I respected the choice and hoped that this story will be better, but with every chapter I grew to dislike this story more and more especially in the last chapters and truthfully I do not know if I'll continue to read it.

    Ch 35 Vampire Thor Part VI
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    Thor: The God of Thunder V2
    Anime & Comics · Carrots123
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