Comments of chapter undefined of Genius Mage in a Cultivation World

Some sentences where a bit hard to understand...

I have absolutely no clue as to what's going on here

I'm slightly interested.

The grammar was a bit of an issue, but I have to say, I'm hooked

let's be honest our MC is a drama king, I mean destroying a world just for being cheated on? Talk about overreacting, the wife cheats, you let her go it's not like you are going to die from such a thing, what he did was really drastic, I stopped being a fan of his but aight I'mma keep reading just to see what he'll do in the future, if he overreacts like this again I'mma drop the novel.

thanks for the chapter

lol

I'm lost....

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Can someone explain to me what his magic did???

Redo of Mage

Thx

The first chapter felt kinda cringe. I mean to say that I felt like I was reading a monologue instead of a dialogue. Especially with how the Mc was talking like some highschooler reading his speech to everyone at graduation in a hollywood musical. I think the main reason is that the repetitive emphasis on his comrades (friends, brothers, students, etc.) without mentioning anything about them but some single-word speeches from them. In conclusion, first chapters are hardest to write in any story. I think the dialogue needs rewriting. Although I wasn't hooked, I'm not one to judge by the first chapter only. Especially for novels.

hypocrite bet he gets a harem

yes

good stuff

Gonna look to what happens next