The only constant: change
The translation is good at all points. Thanks to the author for putting in the effort. And not to demotivate but that is likely the only good point. The plot is too flat there is nothing in the mix to make it better. And by flatness I mean as flat as this "._._._._._._._.". It's just; forge strong, forge strong, forge strong. It seems a bit too run of the mill. Also why has this been selected for voting?. There seems to be no apparent reason that would make it eye-catching enough to be put up for trial read.